|Reviews for Return To Me|
| Lara140112 chapter 28 . 2/22
Found this Story this morning and have finished it the same day. Really nice Story and good writing. Enjoyed it a lot. thanks
| TheChronicler1209 chapter 11 . 2/15
Apatti means problem and khatara means danger in Hindi
| thelittlegerman chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
| thelittlegerman chapter 8 . 12/28/2013
What is wrong with Susan?
| thelittlegerman chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
What a dance!
| thelittlegerman chapter 6 . 12/28/2013
I love this chapter.
| thelittlegerman chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
I knew it was her.
| thelittlegerman chapter 4 . 12/28/2013
Well someone certainly doesn't have all the crayons in his box.
| thelittlegerman chapter 3 . 12/28/2013
Exactly. Where is she?
| thelittlegerman chapter 2 . 12/28/2013
Unfortuntely I did not read the books, so I think I may miss a couple of names and such. I still enjoy it though. I like puzzling it all together.
| thelittlegerman chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
This will be the first Narnia story that I read. I am so excited!
| caaaaaaamille777 chapter 28 . 12/5/2013
Such a beautiful rewrite of the hanged up love story from the movie. 3
| La Diablesa chapter 28 . 12/2/2013
The last chapter...I can't believe it , so happy it is finished but sad that the journey has come to an end.
Loved the romance between Susan and Caspian. It really feels as though they've come full circle. Blush blush reading that M, well done and oh my ! :) The farewells between the family really broke my heart. It was almost like when a bride leaves her family home after marriage, knowing that as a wife, the life that she lived before has changed. Caspian comforting her was so sweet. Did not appreciate that scare that they would be separated ! :)
And yeahhhhhhh , Peter Dhira, Lucy Akatosh ! Yes, loved loved loved the ending !
Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us. The level that you write at is truly remarkable. This story will always remain one of my favourites. Sincerely hope you continue writing and you should be very proud of a job exceptionally done !
| La Diablesa chapter 27 . 12/2/2013
Whoa, just whoa ! I honestly don't know how to express all the emotions I felt during and after reading this. What a way to bring the plot so seamlessly together. Intrigue, action, romance, everything but heart breaking sadness as well.
The Tisroc threw me, what a plot twist ! The brother that died at Peridan's hand was another and Rabadash not being a slimey git was as well. I loved how Susan and Caspian came in to save the day. Yeahhh Aslan, always happy when he makes an appearance. I really felt for Dhira and Peter, sniff sniff. Akatosh, sniff sniff sniff.
All in all, really a great chapter and well worth the wait ! My heart actually clenched when peter and dhira separated. However, Susan and Caspian are still wonderfully together and everyone else is safe so I am breathing a sigh of relief.
Loved this chapter, absolutely amazing !
As usual, excellently written !
| rosali sobreira chapter 28 . 11/30/2013
perfeita , adorei , valeu apena espera tanto tempo , para esse final maravilhoso !