Reviews for Gone Astray
SarcasticBimbo chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
That was sad. I can't believe ANYONE would kill Alice.
MrsPeelWe'reNeeded chapter 1 . 5/31/2011
A great story. Very well written.
DidYouCallMeBella chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
UGH, you made me cryXD

great great lovely fic. and so angest!

Alice...*sob*

Loved it. truley completly do:)
AngstGoddess003 chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
Oof, the angst. So lovely. Thanks for sharing!
daydreamingxxx chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
*cries* aww that is so sad, especially as one of my best friend is actually the human version of alice cullen *cries*

really well written though :)
MLEbee17 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
You killed ALICE? Nononononononononono. Hey, good story, but NOT ALICE! Why is it always her?
OstentatiousNature chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
OMG HOW CAN THIS ONLY HAVE 6 REVIEWS!

This is in the top ten most beautiful fan fictions i have ever read...EVER! and, holy crap do i read a lot of fan fiction!

at first i was like...wait, is this in breaking dawn? alice didn't die!

and then i wuz like...oh it was written b4 breaking dawn. lol

but omg holy crap!

i never favorite things, but this deserves it. I LUV LUV LUV THIS!

WORDS CANNOT DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS!

honestly, this is amazing and deserves a 95 out of 10

you made my week!
blackolives10 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Beautiful and moving.
blueeyesandliterature chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
You almost made me cry! Why Alice? This is beautiful.
Nikkirenzo59 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
I love sad, I actually cried! This story was so good. I think you should continue it, like go on father about how they deal with it.

-Nikki
Emmetrocks33 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Great story even though it's sad you feel the sorrow.

Just one question did Alice die?
mayalucille chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Very, very sad-but very, very good. Great characterization!

Hugs,

Maya
tinkapjill40 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Poor Alice! You are a fantastic writer though. You writing is really intense.