|Reviews for Ripples|
| mashiro.x.shiina chapter 26 . 3/15
This story *insert starry eyes.* This was just too perfect. I absolutely loved all the interactions between the characters (especially Juugo and Suigestu).
| fangirl chapter 26 . 2/27
this was a really good au and i enjoyed reading it. the slow realization of sasuke's love for sakura captured me
| Natsumi Sora chapter 1 . 2/24
This never gets old. Ripples is a classic! I actually like your plot more than Kishimoto-san's. Like alot more. Kudos to you! :)
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 26 . 2/21
Your incredibly intricate and detailed plotline was one that Shikamaru could be proud of. You didn't leave any loose ends (save the fact that Madara is still on the loose, but I think that was purposeful and not something you forgot about). The slow-build at the beginning was superb and the muted conspiracy ending was rather perfect. The humor interspersed throughout was just perfect, enough to keep me laughing without overdoing it. Most of all, I enjoyed seeing Sasuke get his ass kicked by Sakura. This story was incredibly realistic. I didn't notice any errors and your syntax is amazing. This story deserves at least a nine point five on a scale of one to ten.
(I think reading this will give me the willpower to muscle through the rest of the Naruto manga. Sasuke gets on my nerves way to much in that series...)
Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 25 . 2/21
I'm a very visual reader so let me take a moment to laugh at several things... Oh my god! Lee and Chouji transformed into Sasuke and Sakura and running too fast! Hahahaha! Naruto and Kakashi transformed into little girls and Sasuke as a old man with his granddaughters! Hahahaha! Sakura having 'The Talk' with Sai! Oh god, I almost died laughing there!
Ahem, moving on... I was expecting a knock-down-drag-out fight at the end, like Sasuke's big fight with Itachi and Sakura, but I suppose that isn't how one deals with a conspiracy. It was very good. Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 24 . 2/21
Aww, this rescue is totally cute (and certainly a little hilarious). I would love to see Lee inside Sasuke's body, though I'd probably die laughing at the sight. And then in the pairs of fake Sakuras and Sasukes, Lee and Chouji are a couple! That's even funnier. Just imagine Chouji as Sakura! All your hilarity aside, this story just gets smarter and smarter. The conspiracy is so believable that I don't even feel the need for a tinfoil hat. Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 23 . 2/21
Oooh, this just gets better and better. I can't wait to see how this all ends! (I still love Sai.) I'd also like you give you praise for your amazing syntax. It's very rare that I come across a word that I don't know and yet I've looked up at least three as I've read this. That is quite a feat. Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 22 . 2/21
I adore Sai. I really do. For all that he lacks personality and social skills, he's so funny and cute. I could just imagine him asking Sasuke all those pertinent questions and poking big holes in his ego by doing so. (Plus, his horrible nicknames... someone help him.) Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 19 . 2/21
Oh! My! God! Where was this scene in the anime? Where was this scene in the manga? I absolutely loved this! I've wanted someone to beat some sense into Sasuke from the first page he left! Not only did he get beaten, but he was beaten by Sakura! (Face it. Naruto needs more badass girls.) This was perfect! This was amazing! You are my new God! Kudos, kudos, kudos, kudos!
(I'd like to give you a more concrete review than just all this fangirl-style gushing, but I can't help it. You have no idea how long I've been waiting for this exact moment.)
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 18 . 2/21
That is exactly the reaction I wanted to see in the series! Sasuke is such an ass! He really needs to have his head caved in and be dragged back to Konoha, kicking and screaming. I am now, officially, in love with this story. Hopefully, you keep that vibe in the next chapter or I'll cry in abject disappointment. Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 13 . 2/21
Fantastic quote at the end of this chapter. There was a specific moment in this fight that I really liked, but I can't remember what it was now. Too many other cool things happened. Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 6 . 2/21
I'm highly amused by Sakura's dismemberment game. Ah, the things we do when we're bored. I can imagine trying to play that on long car rides... or maybe I can't... Usually you go on long trips with people you like. I can't wait to see what Sasuke does. Anyway, further kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 5 . 2/21
"Ringing any bells?" ... "All was silent in Sasuke's belfry." I'm not sure why that made me laugh so hard, but it did. It was very clever while Sakura was making references to what I think was the movie "The Shining." (There are lots of axe-wielding pyschos out there in movies.) Anyway, kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 4 . 2/21
I wonder if Sasuke was a little more nonchalant when he thought Sakura was Haru... I wonder if she saw him naked... That would have been a little funny to see and would probably make it more awkward for them to have to share a bed. This story is just getting better and better. Kudos to you!
| ParadiseAvenger chapter 3 . 2/21
Ignoring for a moment the fact that we readers know that Haru is really Sakura... If Haru was Sakura's cousin, that would make his name "Haru Haruno." And that is incredibly hilarious! Still a wonderful story, though I'm a little surprised Sasuke already figured out the truth about Haru. I figured that would last a few more chapters. Either way, I can't wait to see what he does with this knowledge. (The little part of me that thinks he's just an ass is certain he's going to turn her in or kill her... but the sensibly part of my brain is pretty sure that isn't the case.) Kudos to you!