|Reviews for Fate|
| Paste chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
hand (left hand)
2.- Say the name of your love. - The Pirate on wheels
3.- Close your hand
4.- Say the name of a weekday - Thursday
5.-Say your name -Pirate's old Flame Rising on Wheels
6.- Open your hand
7.- Paste this to 15 comments and the day you said (step # 4) he/she will tell you that they like you and maybe even engaged or maybe kiss you. If you don't do it something will go wrong in about an hour
| Arbotos chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
I really didnt like all the dialogue needed more action imo.
1/5 since you wrote so much storys there are no excuses.