Reviews for Fate
Paste chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
hand (left hand)
2.- Say the name of your love. - The Pirate on wheels
3.- Close your hand
4.- Say the name of a weekday - Thursday
5.-Say your name -Pirate's old Flame Rising on Wheels
6.- Open your hand
7.- Paste this to 15 comments and the day you said (step # 4) he/she will tell you that they like you and maybe even engaged or maybe kiss you. If you don't do it something will go wrong in about an hour
Arbotos chapter 2 . 6/20/2008
I really didnt like all the dialogue needed more action imo.

1/5 since you wrote so much storys there are no excuses.