|Reviews for The Reader|
| Cutejohn1234 chapter 40 . 10/15
i feel idk sad oc should have been able to make a more happy ending bruh oh well not my story thanks anyway it was a enjoyable read
| Encrouz chapter 40 . 7/29
Even though I finished this, there was so much Kara could've done despite the charm. She could've saved so much people. But since this is an Sirius x OC we don't get anything but him, right? She was also very useless. You'd think she'd spend more time learning magic than at the pub. She could've gotten the Diary, the basilisk when she was at Hogwarts. BUT NOOOOOOO. She could've done something about Peter, but NOOOO. And when she was sent to the frontlines...gosh I was cringing. Even if she couldn't tell Dumbledore, she could've prepared herself adequately, but NOOOOOO. She was useless and both times Sirius had to save her like the useless female protag she is. Author didn't even bother writing about the last book. All they said was "oh damn, lupin's dead...fred's dead." SHE LITERALLY COULD'VE PREVENTED IT? WHERE'S THE ENERGY SHE HAD FOR SIRIUS AND NOT FOR MOONY? if she really loved james and lily, no matter what fudge said, she would've talked to him. She knew about the books/movies, she knew and decided..."oh let me just slack off and not pratice almost no magic whatsoever." Also, is it just more or was there NO FUCKING SPELLS MENTIONED AT ALL? GAWH DAMN?! man wtf?
| adfasdgags chapter 1 . 6/11
a charm that prevents her from revealing or changing anything.
so fkin bad and author fiat. No point in writing statons of canon bs. Just delete this pile of garbage
| pickledherring4brekkie chapter 1 . 1/29
Such an amazing fic, loved every second of it! Thank you
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/20/2022
Wow you made stations of canon a plot point. So much irony… so bad… omg I can’t believe it
| 1KaraFan chapter 8 . 7/21/2022
poor Kara I can't imagine having to be around them like she is knowing their future and how little she can change it :(
| nevertheless27 chapter 40 . 4/29/2022
This is one of my favorite self insert fanfics.
| Guest chapter 40 . 4/23/2022
No offense, but what is the point of this character/story, if she doesn't change a thing?
| ObsessedwReading chapter 40 . 4/12/2022
I've really enjoyed reading this.
| Reina36 chapter 40 . 3/4/2022
aww I loved this fic
| lizyeh2000 chapter 40 . 10/12/2021
Loved your story , now favourited!
| ISY chapter 1 . 8/17/2021
I’m not a fan of the oc unfortunately. I like the premise, of a character having detailed info on the future, but I dislike the execution. She’s just really dull and really gives off hopeless vibes? Like for me, I wish the story would’ve been more about her trying to get AROUND the curse and figuring out how she could maybe hint stuff without outright mentioning info. It could’ve been a build up of her sprinkling little hints here and there where at the end, they come together. I think perhaps why I dislike it is because she boasts about how important friendship is, but in the end, she did jack to save any of her friends. For gods sake… she left Sirius in jail for FOURTEEN YEARS! Like maybe if she decided not to associate with the marauders and lily, it would make more sense? Her perspective being colder and more objective, but she really seems to have developed a relationship with them which really confuses me. Another comment said she just added an alternate perspective instead of rewriting her own story which I completely agree with. It just wasn’t interesting for me to continue. The first 1970s arc was so important, minuscule changes could’ve shifted the future for the better so easily!
| MushroomGloomCorner chapter 40 . 6/18/2021
| arubaturos chapter 40 . 5/25/2021
I love this story
| zlizernight chapter 13 . 3/18/2021
You said in the disclaimer that JKR is a much better writer. From what I see, you were too humble.