Reviews for A day at the amusement park
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
Awesome start
killer4853 chapter 14 . 7/3/2014
Guest chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Trashing Walmart? You do know that (even in fiction), that is a terrible thing to say. Lots of people depend on the store, prices will raise to cover their loss. People will lose their jobs, etc. Also, Walmart does not stock sex toys. when a couple is married, why should the wife have to fight a low life like Tanya?
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2013
Bella has really changed. Now the Cullens are so poor, they have to sneak into the park without paying. That's really a shame. Their desire to prank the humans means Bella has forgotten how much she hated being pranked as a human. How soon we forget!
1234567890inactive chapter 21 . 12/30/2012
loved this story so much i had a blast reading and it was so funny
gerryade.merrygold chapter 21 . 12/15/2012
update plz
Myra Bones chapter 14 . 12/10/2012
Well, that escalated quickly.
alice and bella cullen 4ever chapter 19 . 11/20/2011
i am so sorry 4 your loss i wish you the best and hope that he lives on in your memory
AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley chapter 5 . 4/29/2011
awesome its was so funny
MidnightSeductress13 chapter 9 . 10/5/2010
emilybooth2000 chapter 19 . 7/18/2010
im sorry to hear about your dad and mum. your story is really cool and funny maybe u shud be a author. i cant wait to read the rest
MERCEDEES123 chapter 19 . 7/10/2010
i am so sorry about your dad. may his soul rest in peace.
MERCEDEES123 chapter 4 . 7/10/2010
i luv this story somuch. i'm actualy crying with laughter
Jenna Mckeown chapter 4 . 7/4/2010
omg im sat in my front room laughing my arse off haha my parents are now questioning my sanity lol luv it 3
courtneycullen chapter 19 . 6/15/2010
i am so sorry but i love your story
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