|Reviews for Forever|
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 8 . 2/25
Ohhhh, I really hope she'll be ok. The kind woman's medieval way of speaking is really cool. And, again, all those details about their injuries, the open wounds, the sunburn- excellent! I'm now inspired to make my own writing more detailed.
| SumerSnow chapter 8 . 2/20
I hope Jill survives!
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 7 . 2/4
OHHHHHHHHHHH, I hope she'll be alright! The way the kind woman speaks old English is so neat, the way a man (I forget who) in the original book spoke in an Irish way. This is so fantastic, please keep it up!
| SumerSnow chapter 7 . 2/2
Yeeeeeessssss! Thanks sooo much for updating! its great!
| SumerSnow chapter 6 . 1/28
Please tell me you're goin to cuntinue! if you do, it would be awsome!
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 6 . 1/26
This chapter has to be one of the best, in my opinion at least. The image of two girls running toward a carnivorous dinosaur and screaming their heads off and thus greatly confusing it, is just so funny! And so was her thinking loopilly about the 'Nice dinosaurs.' Also, that was a really cool fact about the coronary vein in there!
Please update really soon!
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 5 . 1/26
Hahaha, good comparison with Jurassic Park.
Also, again, THE REALISTICNESS! It's fantastic! Including the burning-hot sand, thirst, and dry bleeding lips are really realistic and great details (painful for the characters, I'm sure, but neat to include).
| CatGirlFireflare chapter 4 . 1/26
This is great! I like that last line about the water deciding that it didn't like being there, hehehe. Also it's great how realistic the details are, how their legs went numb from the water, for example.
| GinnyStar chapter 6 . 12/10/2009
Well written, good inaction, and good background, nice save then on the end.
| GinnyStar chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
Sorry to wait till the end, well written, good inaction good background, and you chapter was not dull, nice way the dolphins got the two to land, and the one helping out till she could get there.
| Kalima Idina chapter 6 . 11/27/2009
This is amazing! It just drew me in... I hope you realize what a brilliant writer you are. Please update soon - I can't wait to hear the rest of Sue and Jill's story!
| gamecocker chapter 6 . 7/6/2009
Glad to have you back. There are few Dinotopia that get updated often. Anyways good chapter and hope to see more of them.
| tweedledee123 chapter 6 . 6/7/2009
BAH! you can't just leave it there!
amazing chapter, even if it was short-you had me sitting on the edge of my seat the whole time! imagine us...fighting a dinosaur...we probably would try. update quickly!
| gamecocker chapter 5 . 9/18/2008
Okay don't ever remember there being a small desert on Dinotopia but I guess that's your design. Great Chapter and love the cliffhanger. Hope you update soon.
| tweedledee123 chapter 4 . 8/30/2008
ha ha, i like the part with the flat...and i probably would freak out about it. and the fact that my greatest fear is drowning! great chapter!