Reviews for The Roronoa Fruit |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG OMG OMG OMG! AMAZING O.O sooooooooooo good i love sanzo! i can't wait till you update |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my goooooood I am now a puddle of goo from this chapter! X3 *siiiigh* Warm, Fuzzy feelings B'aw I almost don't want it to be over! I eagerly await the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() yeah! finally fianlly they are together! And i just love love love how you made Sanji realized that he is in love with Zoro. :D I can harldy wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That kiss was worth the wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, Zoro being shy and inexperienced is really adorable, and rare to see. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God you are edging amazing! I love this story so much! I cant wait for the end and at the same time I never want it to stop, lol. Great job and I look forward to your next update! Thank you for your hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I actually thought it would take longer for them to get together after the confession, but I think it worked out okay. Im glad for the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NOoooooo! Not the dreadful last chapter! I really don't want this story to end but I am totally looking forward to that lemon! But now if u finish this story u can update the other ones ;) thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The one thing I like about your writing is how you intervene the details into their characters. You describe the kiss fully, you describe the scent of Sanji, the taste of Zoro, but not just with empty words. Rather, you use these to exemplify their characters even more. Also, Sanji's hesitation nearly killed me - thought you should know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been awhile since ou last updated! I'm so glad that they're finally together! Will there be a lemon? If so, who would top? Don't answer if you don't feel like it! Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() This was fine on so many levels. I like how you had Sanji interpret Zoro's hesitation as seriousness and honesty, because that's how I would think Zoro's mind to be. He is blunt to the point of pain and has this "No nonsense."-attitude. :) Also, his virginity is believable, at least how you out it seems plausible to me. You know, these weird Kushina (was that her name?) issues and stuff - figures that he would somewhat save everything up for a special someone. Well, and he has issues. :D What I didn't like is Sanji overly cautious. He isn't really a man, who thinks a scenario through, or that's how I got it in the anime/manga. He's just as forward as Zoro, ain't he? :/ *thinker's face* Thank you for the update, anyway. Oh, ouh, my compliments to the author. It's pretty stylish how you managed to make this fic into canon, 'cause let's be honest - It could totally be a filler episode or even part of the main story just like that piece with the memory-eating sea horse. You remember, right? :D Thanks for the update, looking forward to the next and, sadly, last one! xoxo Helen |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was just so...cute! I really love the shyness of Zoro that's displayed here and Sanji is very nice to make those small and gentle moves. I want to read the next chapter! But that would also mean the fic's over D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() qewrgyaesi I don't care if there is any pr0nz that was amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute I liked how Sanji really had trouble debating whether he should climb the ladder or not. Also, the scene when he sees Zoro, and his motivation dies away, but get fueled up again when Zoro asks him about the sunrise and sunset question. Ahhh, the next one is going to be the last chapter? So soon! But then again, I was the one who said I was fine as a one-shot. What was I thinking then? I'm looking forward to the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kyyyyaaa! I squeeled like a fangirl when I saw that you had updated and oh boy was this chapter worth the wait! I feel all warm and fuzzy inside, such a sweet moment that leaves you wanting more! Kudos! |