Reviews for The Roronoa Fruit |
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![]() ![]() I love it. your rock! |
![]() ![]() "Zoro kissed him, and Sanji felt alive." GAAAAAH Just kill me know I think my brain melted out of my ear with how perfect a final sentence that was. And so darn cute. ;-; I just wanted to say, I am firmly, FIRMLY in the Sanji catcher camp however, this was so well written you may have moved my heart a little. I mean, I'm okay with Sanji topping as long as Zoro gets his shot first but this was outside my wheelhouse, and it was a new take I've never seen and I very much enjoyed it. Zoro just straight up offering his ass to Sanji was incredibly hot. I love how you wrote them both vulnerability along with the strength that we all already know. So yeah, just wanted to say, thoroughly enjoyed this entire story, I love love love your characterization and your writing has obviously improved over the span of time it took you to finish this. Oh and also the whole sunrise thing turned me into a pile of goo, so ridiculously sweet in the best possible way. Yup, loved this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was seriously one of the BEST Zoro x Sanji fanfic that I've ever read! I just love your writing style and how you made their relationship grow as the story advances... And the romantic ending... Fufufu |
![]() ![]() I'm so sad that this isn't continuing :-( |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for another great story it was fantastic. I really love all your stories now going to find another one of yours to read sylvia1984 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you captured their personalities and developed the relationship between the two, very well done :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing love it! |
![]() ![]() Wow. This is the most well-written fan fiction I have ever read. The way you depict these guys is so close to my head canon it made me dizzy. So many warm feelings sprouting everywhere. Well done, and thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! I don't really ship ZoroxSanji, but I'm really into it now XD The only thing that I thought was wrong was that sometime in the story (I forgot which chapter) Luffy was swimming, despite having eaten a Devil Fruit. But other than that, this story is great! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! . |
![]() ![]() I was really enjoying this story really was until I read this page and realized despite the order of the names sanji would be seme, normally I don't have a problem with pairs switching up, most would. Though after seeing doujinshi's of both I really don't like visualizing zoro as the uke at all, it never looks right. Sanji is the more girly one he was even dressed as one for a while prettier than the other drag queens in OP anyhow. I chose this story because it sounded good and I always seem to want to believe if zoro's name is first it means zosan not sanzo. Strange there are quite a few sanzo fanfics because most of the doujin's are zosan which I much prefer but ran out of ones to read. I really like how you have the build up to the relationship going here, but now that I know that Zoro will be uke especially if he starts out uke I don't think I can continue to read it, and it makes me sad because I was really getting into it. I don't demand things but I wish people would state at the start of a story if it will be zosan or sanzo or both and if so who is the more dominate. All the Japanese doujin's I read I have yet to see a sexy uke zoro they can't do the facial expressions right when he is the uke and it just don't look right. From a gay male friend of mine who's history is very much like a cruel yaoi story, he is the uke and the more girly acting in his relationships, but he is a nice looking guy, without any make up most girls would go ape for him. Sanji could be more forward sexual but so can woman but they still end up being on the bottom, unless they are extremely kinky or lesbian. Anyway sorry to talk so much, love the writing, was just really disspointed when I read page 5, was so looking forward to a zosan story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story :) |
![]() ![]() Omg! I am absolutely IN LOVE with your portrayal of Chopper. It's just too cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is too sweet to be true |
![]() ![]() I started this thing ages ago, and then forgot about it, and then I picked it up again. Glad I waited so long, it was finished and everything. I loved the arc with the mountain people, it almost felt like a real one piece arc it was great, and luffy was hilarious, you somehow got actual comic comedy into the written word. Also zoro sanji stuff was lovely too. You're amazing! |