OOh I loved this chapter! Zoro is so cute taking care of Sanji in his need! It was just so cute! I almost thought Zoro was going to kiss him there at the end of the chapter, but he didn't.

I can't wait for the next chapter and I hope it comes out soon!

D'aw, Zoro's jealous 3 he did get pretty nasty there though, but i guess it's just in his nature to get that way, ne? and Zoro using washing dishes as a work-out is genius.

Oh sweet baby Jesus. I. I. I. No words. I'm simultaneously splitting my sides with ROFLing laughter and trying not to explode in squee. My nervous system is not too fond of me right now, let me tell you. (:

You, madam, are a COMIC. GENIUS. Or maybe I'm just easily amused xD probably a sweet mixture of both!

-"Yes you are," Sanji put the stick between his lips and pulled out his lighter. "You're doing the Zoro freak out thing."

"Meh," Sanji drawled, "shut up shitty-swordsman and make me a sandwich."-

COMPLETELY HYSTERICAL. I had to take a five minute laugh attack pause for both of them. (: Update soon!

I DO! One of the main reasons I read this story was 'cause it was Friendship and not Yaoi. If you added something, I'd be really, really happy. I was a bit disappointed upon hearing the news that this would be romance. The chapter was good though. I'm proud of Zoro for cooking :3

yesss~!

ha ha! the wait has been worth it!

:DDDDD

getting this next chapter TOTALLY made my evening~

*claps*

So very good, so very good. Though I love your Zoro x Sanji moments, which are amazing!, what I love best about this story is the simple things in the background that really make it come to life, the deatils that give it depth, breadth, and scope. For example, Usopp's hair thind, Zoro's dishwashing muscles, there's too many to name.

The pace is slow and sweet, perfect for the tone that you're trying to capture. But even with the leisurely pace, it is not boring at all. There is no superfluity, no paragraphs filled with redundant and repetitive jargon. I read each word happily.

I like how you are introducing this treasure map and adventure in the jungle, it sounds both interesting and smart-now you won't be limited to just the Sunny Go's environment.

As for rhe Zoro x Sanji relationship; I say make it Yaoi, becuase to me, it's already heading that way, with Zoro being jealous and over-conscious of thier bodies touching. I recommend not making a sister fic becuase I think that would be a little too...a little too much like reducing your story to a canned soup level and offering both tomato flavor and chicken flavor. It would reduce the impact of the story, I beleive. If you really wish to make a platonic, more nakamaship story, then don't abandon the idea! Just begin another story which will be just as beautifuyl :) I wish nothing but the best for you whatever you choose.

So sorry that I didn't review before, but now I will!

Good luck and Good Job!

Wow!

Zoro is cute! He's really cute in this chapter!

The way he got jealous when Sanji was swooning over the gifts Nami and Robin gave him was very adorable!

I got the heart twinging feeling when Zoro was sad that Sanji didn't praise him in the same way as Robin or Nami.

The random part that made me laugh, "yohoho"ing.

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MORE. PLEASE.

Please?

I loved that "musicians 'yohohoho'ing" Part, seriously, I LOL'ed so much.

You know what I’m gunna pull a Zoro. I will get jealous if you do a sister fic cause I know that will take your time away from this one. *shrugs* That is just one little Lolly’s vote though. .

As for this chapter it was amazing! I love how you are able to bring to life everyday simple things, and make them seem so exciting and new. I also rather had fun trying to spot out any hits of my own suggestions in this chapter. *blushes* I really I’m so selfish hehe.

I applauded you on your work. You make it seem so easy for the story to keep flowing and keep entertaining. It makes me think it’s only a matter of time before your book gets published ... I hope you won’t forget us and still come to write fanfic when your all big and famous though hehe … look at that, more greedy selfish desires. .~

Great to see the story off and running again. Well thought out and written as always. As for the platonic relationship I would like to see a sister fic that was pure friendship. I like my romance as much as any other fangirl but there are really not enough friendship fics with Zoro and Sanji. It seems like no matter what the author starts out doing they just can't resist pairing them. I would really like it if you branched this story into two different realities. One romance one nakamaship. Either way I will be eagerly awaiting your next chapter. (but please don't make me wait two years, can't believe we haven't added to the crew since your last update.)

I WOULD LIKE A SISTER FLICK PLEASE!

...Aw...I was kinda looking forward to this being a platonic relationship...

But I'm not saying I don't like yaoi~! I look forward to it, either way!

Yay! I'm excited! Congrats to the winners!

OMGOGMOGMGOJGKOGMGOGKDVSHDV! EEEEE! happy happy! So happy you liked my idea XD *HUG*

I can't believe I missed the deadline. I wish I found this story earlier. -.-

-darknessslayer0