That was absolutely stunning. I can't stop shaking.
I think this is a very important moment. I've just found my favorite writing style. This is just too much. The affect this story had on me was almost too much to handle. Im not even sure why.

In the beginning I thought "if this is them growing gradually from (not really)hate, to friendship, then to love it's going to be the end of me"
I don't like being right.

The one thing that really got to me was how slow the process was of them actually reaching that point of mutual understanding and need to move foreward in their relationship. It happened at the second to the last chapter. AND IT WAS SO PERFECT. I really admire how you took your time with them, let the experiences and small hints pile up so they have a firm foundation to build on! They learned so much about eachother, it was just so endearing to see them grow as close as they did.

It was such a pleasure to read because in my mind the whole story wasn't only surrounding Zoro and Sanji, the main plot was brilliant because in the end they were the main elements allowing the plot to move on as it should. Yeah they were in EVERY scene, but the way you wrote them in made me feel like they weren't the center or purpose of everything from the very start, all the small facts simply led to them being a large part of the bigger picture.

The way you used the facts was great, like the small "triangle" that happened towards the end with Nami which ended up laying down the final necessary path for Sanji to "get it", or the obvious separation of Brook from the group because he doesn't breathe or eat plus the fact that he ends up being an important source of information for the reader and he also takes out a lot of unnecessary explanations and dialogue later during the busy "gather and escape" scene, and finally the Roronoa Fruit, by far one of the smallest plot elements that ended up being the only solution to the story's problem and also the thing that kickstarted the main pairing of the story. Amazing. I just loved it!

Haha I'm sorry, when I get excited over stuff I have to get it out there somehow. I hope I'm receiving all of your ideas the right way, it would be a shame for me to mistake all of your hard work as something less than it really is.
I had a great time reading your story! I know I won't soon forget it. Thankyou for all your hard work.

Aww I wanted to see how everyone would react if they kissed! Oh, well! This story was sooo super awesome! I totally loved it!
:)

Oh wow. That was so cute and perfect and full of feelings and sexy as hell and detailed and perfect. ;D I really liked this. Wow. Why did I ever stop reading anime/manga fanfiction?

I miss this. Missed this. Fanfiction. Its been too long. Now I wanna go back and watch One Piece aga- can you tell me you gave me a million feels? Aw man, I can't.

anyway. :'D this was really cute. I wish I knew of more fics that included zoro and sanji's relationship on Sunny instead of the AU fics I remember (though AU is awesome too). You know what I mean? I wanna read more fics that have ZoSan but with the crew reacting to the relationship and everyone doing what they usually do with pirating and adventuring but zoro and sanji have a thing going on and- god I loved this.

okay, we get it. I'm going to stop talking now. :'D

I really really like the way you write for zoro and sanji. Most if the fics I read have their personalities so weird. But in this fic they're so... So canon? Like, they act like they do in the manga/anime. They're believable? You know what I mean?

anyway. Loved the sweet!cuteness in this chapter. :D and what do you mean there's one left? Booooo. Haha. Looking forward to see how they're going to act around the rest of the crew and all that jazz. :D

How awkward. D: fekdmdkskajsj these two ajdjdnsjs

well, at least Sanji finally knows. :'D

Aw man the angst. The feelings. That food at the end, because man that sounded good and now I'm hungry. :'D

Man, it's been too long. :'D this is really really good. Is still really good. I stopped reading because I wanted to read all of it at once. I kept forgetting what happened in the previous chapters so I just waited until you finished it. :D

anyway. Great chapter. :D

Wow, can't believe I've only just found this fic. Lovely and interesting story line, and really like how you seemed to capture the more boyish elements from them. Definite favorite right here and looking forward to reading thr rest of your work!

Awwww! :) Perfect ending to a perfect story! :)

I really, really liked this story! Watching Sanji and Zoro's relationship change from antagonistic to tentative friendship to true friendship to something else to love was just amazing how everything progressed.

I... I can't even... Comprehend the awesomeness of this fic... Like... I haven't even looked into this pairing(or any One Piece pairings for that matter) before and from this I am suddenly insanely IN LOVE WITH IT. I literally COULD NOT STOP READING. It was midnight when I started read. The time I'm writing this? 7:45am. I stayed up because I couldn't stop. xD You're awesome. I'mma go stalk your other stuff now (or fall asleep...)

you probably get this alot, but this has to be the best, most meaningful zosan fanfic i have ever read. it had me in tears of joy at how believable and romantically sweet this story was. i furerly enjoyed it and cant wait to read more of your stories.
yours sincerely
lucy x

This story made me so ridiculously happy! I absolutely loved it! :D

I love it XD
the slow building up of the romance, the plot, not to mention when Sanji woke all giddy and feeling like 13... that line was perfect XD

That... That was was a good one. I don't think I'll be able to stop smiling for a little while. I feel like people are going to look at me funny if I happen to think of this amazing story in public and chuckle. Oh well.