Reviews for Ninja Wire
Alehhandro chapter 13 . 2/2/2010
a good story you have here...the idea is unusual and interessant but i miss the development of skill in naruto and the others... they became too strong too fast... but well not everybody is perfect... i'll wait till next chapter and wanna see some awesomeness...

tiill later then... alehhandro... .;-]
Thastaer chapter 13 . 1/29/2010
Wow I like the story so far can't wait until next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 12 . 1/23/2010
awesome story
gemiinous chapter 13 . 1/15/2010
i freaking love this! tenten is so cool, and ive always loved badass samurai naruto! please doont abandon this, update!
the panda chapter 13 . 12/3/2009
what gives? you no longer writing? it would suck to see a story with actual quality to stay incomplete when there's so many finished stories that are garbage. Please keep this story alive!
the panda chapter 12 . 12/3/2009
If nobodies gotten the bleach reference im guessing its the "you always are off to the left if only a hairs width" comment. But i couldn't tell you anything but it sounded familiar lol
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 13 . 10/13/2009
sweet story
Ralph Lionheart chapter 13 . 9/18/2009
Please tell me you plan on continuing this, it's so hard to find good stories in any shipping but this is a great story, your writing is incredible with good amounts of character development between naruto and tenten. the only thing i would like to see is a little development with Neji. but otherwise this in a incredible story and I hope you continue to update it.
DarkMasterStarr chapter 6 . 7/7/2009
I like how the story is coming out. You don't see much "Chakra-less Naruto stories out there". I think you balanced out Naruto pretty good in terms of strength and it's a nice twist of him unable of molding chakra. Nice job.
TenWings chapter 13 . 6/28/2009
UPDATE SOON!
iamnuff chapter 2 . 6/21/2009
gai is team nine, team ten is hinata-shino-kiba,

in this fic lee is gai's son eh? beliveable i guess

dont really understand the sword, you could explain it a little better...
Sephiroth owns u all chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
yay
Slayer End chapter 13 . 4/2/2009
I like where you're going with this. But, I'm forced to pose the question of what you're going to do with Haku. Will Haku be male or female. Also, aside from the extra genin, will Wave be Canon in the results? Finally, what about the Chunin Exams?

Forever Signed in Blood,

Slayer End
Finbar chapter 13 . 3/19/2009
Summary: Awesome story! Please update soon.

The Full Review: This is the best 'chakraless' and 'Naruto inplace of Lee' stroy I have seen. By far and away the best! Naruto is retaining his own personality and not becooming a Lee clone, while creating a new and interesting fighting style, not simply maxing out Taijutsu. Neji is a WAY more fleshed out and beter person and in canon, but I'd like to see more of Tenten's personality. Is she going to pair with Naruto?

Yay for Sasuke and Sakura bashing:)

Kudos to you for a great story, please update soon:)

Cheers

Finbar
Red Echantress chapter 13 . 3/8/2009
this story is so cool!

i think in your story of course, is the most strongest genin team in konoha...i like how team Gai interract!their teamwork is flawless, unbeatable...

can you update more?

and i like naruto being a strategist in this story...

update more please...
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