Reviews for Parallels
henryfitzroy chapter 1 . 5/10/2009
i love your story i hope to read more chapters
NicolettexMarie chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I love this. Love it love it love it. Lol. Actually, I think my favorite part is the last line. :D It just ENDS there, with her saying "I know". I like it like that because it leaves it so open and unfinished... just like Bella and Jacob themselves. Definitely on my favorites list. Great job.
WrittenSound chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
U should continue this pwease. Do they... go on? Or does Jake leave? Do they end up together? Gr... I need the end of this story because I need to know that Jacob wins. Edward sucks.
HistoryintheMaking chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
wow. now that's some deep shit. I love it by the way.
The Musings of Artemis chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
awe! Poor Bella torn between two guys! :(

But I love it! I wonder what Bella is thinking now. Please update soon! :)

Artemis
Fantasyfan4ever chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I think I know what eventually happens...

Anyways, nice oneshot! J/B 4ever no matter what!
Rinneh chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Will there be more?
Skullduggery Goodfellow chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
I don't think Bella sleeping with Jacob would be something possible. She just loves Edward to much.
bitten-by-luv chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
aaw.

poor bella. i love this story cuz everyone's so in character. you cant really find that a lot in the twilight stories.