|Reviews for Right|
| Kellbella chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
What an awesome vignette! Firstly, Dean's learning to drive and then John handing over the keys really speaks volumes about his trust in Dean. I love how you added that Dean never took the driver's test.
Secondly, you are the master at creating visuals for your readers with very little words. I bow down to your creativity!
| amyblair chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I live in Iowa and there's lots of corn here. Corn in the spring is about knee high, not much on it as far as corn yet. Just an FYI.
This was lovely. I thought you did a great job and I loved "Dean was the second line of defense, the fail safe."
| Elesem chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Really nice little vignette. Dean's warm sense of contentedness came through perfectly. I caught one tiny glich in your excellent english, "It was still low enough to make the sky (to) look disconcertingly big..." Just take out that 'to'.
Also, thanks for putting Coven on your story alerts. Feel free to comment!