Reviews for The Baby Making Kit
Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2016
Oh my god
Cheerful Regression chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Cuuuuuuute!

-CR
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
thats cute
CatEyes99 chapter 1 . 1/19/2013
OMG even I blushed fifty shades of red and laughed my ass off. That was very fuuny :D
MariaSabaku chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
LMAO! That was hilarious! Great job! I loved it. :]
mec chapter 1 . 3/12/2009
LMAO!

awesome one-shot!

and i agree w/ you...

i love shinto too!

such a cute, gullible child! ;D
mood ink chapter 1 . 2/10/2009
haha. funny idea about the baby making kit!
nanamisakurachan chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
hahahahaha! its so funny...

technology has made a BIG diff! no more animal abuse! lol

i liked it... FAV!
kiwi4me chapter 1 . 1/16/2009
hahhaa cute!

Shinto kinda reminds me of Naru hahaha!
The Black Sheep Juri chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
so damn funny ! i loved it ... i so have to show this to my sis ... she's a mad naruto fan and i kno she'll find it funny. anyway good work.

inupupby5
Useless-Materia chapter 1 . 1/1/2009
This is cute! You should write more ShikaIno
angry panda chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
that was hillarious
VampireDesire chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
hahahaha, that's so hilarious!

lol, usually guys would be ecstatic to have sex but shika doesn't seem to hahaha, lol funny
Violet chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
Moomoogir1,

My name is Violet and i am in charge of a writing group called the Moon Writers. We all read your story "Baby Making Kit' and thought it was pure genius! The way you both portrayed Shikimaru and Ino, their life, their child, and the other children was hilarious and 'd like to offer you a challenge, well Derek does any way... Write a story, another InoxShika, containing clouds, a sunset, and Naruto getting Ino pissed off. We all look forward to hearing the story if you take our challenge, but you have all rights to turn us, Derek, down.

Good luck,

Violet, Bella, Eliana, Ace, and Derk (The Moon Writers0

P.S: Derek says you can write with us any day... email me at if you don't want to take the challenge.
xxarmisteadxx chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
aw...i love shinto too!

he's so cute and innocent and cute...

and did i mention he was CUTE? XD

thanks for writing this! now, I know where babies come from. :]
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