Reviews for My Father's Eyes
ThePurpleRose chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
This is so bittersweet... It's beautifully written; I love it! _
Link Fangirl01 chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Well that's...miserable. Must've hurt, telling his son about the family he lost when said son doesn't even know who he IS.

Miserable, but good nonetheless.
Tettelle chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
Sad and beautiful story...

Nonetheless, I barely imagine Kratos crying... Maybe one tear... But not more...

But you wrote well !

Congrats !
RoyalFanatic chapter 1 . 10/17/2008
This was really nice. Excellent job! _
hamxham chapter 1 . 8/19/2008
this is... really sweet sad... i love it...
Miss Mingxi chapter 1 . 8/12/2008
this is a great story you described everything. . . perfectly :] 9/10 :) its touching -sniff- heheh
LloydsExsphere chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Amazing. You capture everything so perfectly... Your words are true pieces of art. From your colorful similes to your masterful imagery, your fanfiction is always a great joy to read. I always sit so quietly, dazed at your storyline, my breath hushed so as not to disturb my read. I stare hungrily at the screen, scrolling very slowly, savoring all of your words and images. And when your story ends, beautifully as always, I'm left with inspiration, a completeness... You are a true writer.
in-silent-seas chapter 1 . 6/20/2008 cute...except...XD -giggles uncontrollably-

But anyways, I loves it! :)

Eyes of the infinite galaxy chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
That was pretty good! The awkwardness was kept to a nice minimum.
blackdemondragon chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
That was great but kinda sad.

I loved it!


Keep it up and I look forward to your future work.
Baby Kat Snophlake chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
O.O o that was good! Very well written and awesome description. I can clearly see every image. And I loved how you managed to go from the description right into the action so smoothly. Great job! _

freakyanimegal chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Oh...that is so sad...T.T yet so precious...! Nine out of ten!

(blows nose)
changeline chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
This is really cute! I love it!
Cataclysmic Eclipse chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
How sweet, I really liked it. I felt so bad for Kratos at the end of it...poor guy. Kratos seemed fairly in character and Lloyd too. Plus it was nicely written, always a bonus.

I kinda thought it was funny in the beginning when Lloyd was annoyed at Kratos' attitude. Oh, and I guess Raine not liking how Kratos was trying to boss her around was okay, but still seemed un-Raine-like to me a little bit. Oh well, I still loved it.
whiterose2406 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Great oneshot, Sakuya! D

It was simple, but beautifully written... Lloyd and Kratos were completely in character, and I loved both the falling in the dirt scene (lol) and the locket scene at the end there. A touching little moment that made me smile.

Very cool. :)

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