Reviews for Try
Guest chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Isn't he gonna say it back? :/
AnonymousM chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
That was interesting. Although, I don't think it's your best work. Something clearly happened between them before, but I don't think Lily is the type to jump into bed with someone she won't even admit she likes. I mean, really, would you? Although, it could be just me. Those are my thoughts.
Hysterical Ink chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
One word in response to the "Try."

"Awww!" That was so sweet, and I just loved it!

DayDream
DobbyLivesAgain chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
i liked it

very cute and sweet xD
xshrimpyx chapter 1 . 1/29/2009
aw sweet! i loved this one as well! it was so well written :) congrats lol xx
You're Just As Sane As I Am chapter 1 . 10/10/2008
aww...im a sucker for a good fluffly romance story
kitty-re chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I loved it,

beautiful and soft.
withlovethegreeneyedgirl chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
hey. That was great. Yeah. Really gret. Uhh. Wish that the oneshots would be like this more often.
pippapear chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
Wow!

Loved the sexual tension in this one!

Very well done!

She was doomed wasn't she?

Another brill one-shot!

Very powerful!

So a huge thanks!

X
Smile123 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
hey! im just about to read the other one, rain or something like that.

well anyways, I LOVED IT as usual. SO well written. not much else to say really...

oh there was a typo

"All of a sudden, he whirls in front of me. We are stopped right in the center of the corridor. People are streaming around us.

His eyes are burning down into mine. I hate it when he that."

last line- i hate it when he *does* that.

but other than that it was AMAZING! to the next oneshot!
Rosalie Weasley chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
oh!

i really liked that!

good job..:]
SBSL chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Hi there - I just wanted to say thank you for the wonderful read. I'm not actually familiar with your work but I have to say I really enjoyed it :D Your writing style is wonderful and it's really too bad that this is only a one-shot. I especially loved your descriptions.

By the way, we have recently established a new Harry Potter fanfic archive called The Dark Mark and it would be lovely to have you on board. If you're interested just check out the link on my profile or drop me a PM.

Cheers
ThePotterGeek chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
i like it. its cute.
liz22463 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
aww! so sweet!
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
love it!
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