|Reviews for Fork Creek Anthology|
| Typerer13 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
The songs you picked were nice, but your sentences are choppy and your word choices are poor. I'm not being like you, and saying I'm better, but maybe if you lost some of your fucking hubris, you'd become a better writer.
| Tricksterr chapter 2 . 9/8/2008
I walk right up to her, and put my hands on either side of her, pressing her against the counter. “What are you scared of?”
“Are you gonna hurt me?”
“Never.” The last comes out as a whisper, and I press my lips to hers with fervor. She responds after second, wrapping her arms around my neck and pulling me closer. I guess a kiss was all we needed.
I love this part with a passion. This part puts this story on my faves.
The lucky part made me laugh so hard, which makes it munbah two on the reasons this is my favorites!
| LoveShipper chapter 2 . 7/11/2008
When I read "Lucky" I was torn between thinking: "Boy where did that confidence come from?" and "Waho". Lol. Good drabbles, can't wait for more.
| Captain in the Galley chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
God I fuckin' love penis. It's amazing!
| ColorsOfTheSky101 chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
This was great I loved it! You're quite good! :D
My favorotes would have to be Fearless, I Still Haven't Found What i'm Looking For, Company In The Back, and Satelite.
The window one made me laugh :D
Overall, awesome job.
| LoveShipper chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Loved it. Gooey for my liking.