Reviews for Manifesting a Claim
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2016
For the love of the Blue Lady, update please! I love this story!
D.Nicoletta chapter 3 . 7/15/2015
I love this and wish to the universe and Pluto that I could read the rest. I know it's been years but great work
00-night-eyes-00 chapter 4 . 11/6/2013
love it, looking forward to more
Karebear119 chapter 4 . 6/30/2013
This story is Awesome! What an interesting spin you put to it! I love it! I'm favoriting this story with the tiny hope that you will end up finishing it one day :). Keep up the great writing!
wRiTiNcOgNiTo chapter 4 . 2/7/2013
I have to say, this is one of my favorite stories. You write very well and the pure creativity of this story, it's originality is stunning. It's a phenomenal story and it seems as if it has only begun. Are you planning on finishing it?
littlerose23 chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
Waw! This story is great. I realise its been a really long time but i'm hoping that someday you might come back to this and give us another chapter because...waw!
Kat27 chapter 4 . 1/5/2013
Is there any hope we're ever going to see more of this fantastic story? I love the way you write and would damn near kill myself to get the next chapter...
True Essence chapter 4 . 12/18/2012
This is a good story. The last moment in the last chapter was fire! You need to continue. I know that it's been a while but it'd so be worth it. Try to finish please. :)
D.Nicoletta chapter 4 . 11/26/2012
Update! Please!
Pinkbeachlulu chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
Pretty good story so far I would be interested to read more
Chris chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
Wow! What an intriguing idea, and I think you've made Renfro even more evil than she was on the show. Your Max and Alec are soo hot together, and I can't wait to see where you take the mating thing. Enjoyed it thoroughly, thank you.
Nicole chapter 4 . 10/20/2011
For the love of everything that is holy, update please!
FlawedPerception chapter 4 . 10/19/2011
This story is the best Alec/Max story I have ever read! I love the plot how they're stuck in Manticore and how they're "Forced" into mating! (I mean, it's not like she wouldn't have jumped him had she been in the mood) I really hope you continue this story and update soon! This is honestly my favorite story EVER! I love how explicit you are and the smuttiness of the well, smut. 3 this story!
Sarah chapter 4 . 7/8/2011
Out of all the Dark Angel stories I have read this is definitely my favorite!

I know it's been forever since you updated this and you probably don't have plans to continue now... but i would love it if you do!
icklebrina chapter 4 . 4/6/2011

I really have enjoyed reading this story. It's very different from any other story I've read and I'd love to see where you're going with it. I hope you're still writing!

One issue I've noticed is that you seem to mix up your pronouns sometimes using "she" when it should be "he" and "him" when it should be "her" and vice versa. But that's just a nit picky thing to make a great story just that little bit better :)
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