Reviews for Murasaki Iro no Sora Amethyst coloured Sky
smiffywiffy chapter 3 . 10/27/2015
i normally dun like pros stories but i hope u continue! i want to know why kanmuri doesnt belong to himself and what kazuma does!
Magic Smoothie chapter 3 . 5/11/2009
Using Japanese in your dialogue, especially when it's evident that you aren't fluent, is pretty tacky. Your handling of the treatment of prostitutes, though, is really, really good. It's a rare writer who can handle drama like that without it seeming silly or horribly underdone. I would make a few other comments about your writing style/word choice but I'm afraid that would require more time than I have at the moment XP
OrdinaryKyuu chapter 3 . 3/1/2009
I really really luv this story!

Why dun u update this story?

Continue this story please...

Im curious for the end...

Please...
hwangpah chapter 3 . 10/7/2008
T.T i want more graphic scenes xD

good story and i like this pairing :D thing i dont like is that the pig katsuo is in it i think he just spoils everything sometimes. but thats not important.

PLEASE UPDATE FASTER~!

it has been 3 months(its already october..) since u last updated.. cant wait :D
leeya chapter 3 . 8/14/2008
hm...

it is an interesting fic...

i've always wanted to read a fic with heavy plot like this involving azuma & kanmuri...

but then...

why you put it as rated M if you intend to 'CENSORED' all the yaoi lemon scene?

that kinda spoil the mood don't you think?

anyway, ganbatte for the next chapter
pretense chapter 2 . 6/21/2008
Aria, dear... since this is already an M-rated fic, I KNOW that graphic scenes are allowed sicne you HAVE placed the warning and the readers ought to know what they are reading before they actually do... so it's not your fault if any kid gets trauma... XD

but seriously.. I NEED THE LEMON! I've read M-rated fics before and they HAVE all the smex that a yaoi fangirl could ask for.. so I was hoping that yours would too... It's kind of disappointing to have skipped all the yummy parts...

Please do make this fic more graphic... please and thank you.

-pretense-