|Reviews for Invisibility Check|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/13
I dunno...Raph seemed in character...
| Aeryn Lavanthia chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
Loved it! Wonderfully bizarre!
| a fanfictioner chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
oh! I loved it! sooo very much!
| I'm awesome and y'all know it chapter 1 . 9/6/2013
Wow. So funneh!
| I wish to Fly chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
confusing, very confused.
| Second daughter of Eve chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Dude, I want that shirt!
| M chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
And here I thought I'd read all of your stuff. And hooboy did you get me with this one! I had to double check it was the same writer as I continued reading because I know you know the characters better than this. And then that ending. Ha! Fell for it! Great job on this. Really brought a smile to my face.
| aquickdisguise chapter 1 . 10/2/2008
that is just so out-of-blue/flying-fridge type funny! (the best kind of funny!)
three thumbs up! xD
Ps. I really want a T-shirt like that now!
| Amethyst Asheryn chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
Tehe. Love it. *laughing*
The spider thing was funny, even though I'm not sure it was supposed to be. D:
Even the summary is funny! haha. Good job.
| Cynlee chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
That is so weird.
Funny, but weird.
I like the shirt.
| Sewer Slider chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
But... Donnie is sensitive and writes bee-YEWtiful poetry!
Ha, loved it! Especially the finger painting, which truly summed up a certain type of fanfic for me. Although it has to be said, I finished the song for Mikey. Loudly. :)
There's always a need for more crackfic like this! *hint hint* Great job!
| princessebee chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Ya know, combined with the godawful poetry, which I assumed were song lyrics, and this opening line:
"Don sighed, put down the pencil, buried his face in his pillow, and sobbed."
I got really confused. I was all like... um... this isn't quite up to her usual standard. Kinda. I scrolled quickly back up and noted the Humour/Parody tags. Phew!
Very funny. I especially giggled at toddler!Mike.
/nitpick/ the correct term is 'sexual reassignment surgery'. /nitpick/
| ashdemon chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Very interesting. Confusing slightly because I have no idea of the age range they're at but still interesting.
| SilentMyriad chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
ZOMG. I laughed _so hard_. Thank you kindly for the crack. _
| BigfootSighted chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
You have NO idea how hard I tried not to laugh at the whole spider ordeal. It's terrible that you made it angsty as well...so I felt bad for wanting to laugh...but I couldn't help it!