|Reviews for Open Secrets|
| mngrue chapter 14 . 3/31/2013
I really appreciate all the hard work you put into this one, especially since I could see your writing improve over the course of the story. Great job.
| rozzy07 chapter 14 . 6/4/2009
I know...I've fallen seriously behind with my reviews but I just had to say (now, better late than never I hope!) what an extraordinary story you wove here. No sappy happy syrupy ending, no dilution of the Winchester way of doing things or emotional shutdown when things go pearshaped, just the raw honesty of a family that could'nt suture itself back together again despite the brotherly love. In the end it was just an honest conclusion to a brilliantly drafted story that truly made it such a special read. Thank you so much for sharing it with me.
| Dianne chapter 14 . 3/9/2009
This is a fantastic story. The chapters were well thought out and a nice length too. I was hoping Sam and Dean would be friends by the end but I guess it lead into canon. Is there a sequel? You're a very good writer.
| jenilee chapter 14 . 2/24/2009
Congratulations on finishing! That was just a fabulous story, you should be proud.
Everybody is a bit broken in the end but no more than they were to begin with. LOL. I really loved this little glimpse into what “could have been” with this story. Great job. I hope to see more from you.
| jenilee chapter 13 . 2/24/2009
Darn Dean! I knew he was going to do that. Try to take the blame to save Sam being mad at his Dad. Errg! Although I totally understand it and would have done the same thing myself if I thought it would help. Oh man I knew I was going to end up heart broken for our boys at the end of this story. Great chapter btw.
| jenilee chapter 12 . 2/24/2009
Ah she did that on purpose! She knew they wouldn’t have any other choice. Geesh. Poor woman.
Great chapter. Great to see you back(well a while ago I’m just slow to get to reading it. I was hoping you weren’t going to get so swamped that you weren’t able to finish the story.
| masondixon chapter 14 . 2/16/2009
Read your whole sorry and really hope you decide to write more multi-chapter stories in the future. A good job. Thank You.
| Harrigan chapter 14 . 2/16/2009
You know, I think you were very brave to end the story like this. Most readers are looking for a more upbeat ending, but I think you were consistent. The plot didn't unfold with events that would lead Sam to make a different decision than the one he did, and it's kind of refreshing to find a writer who doesn't take the easy way out. And yet who doesn't make the other brother a bad guy either.
And I respect a writer who doesn't beg for reviews but honestly solicits constructive feedback.
I look forward to more fic from you! (But will confess that I generally don't read WIPs, so next time I'll probably wait till it's finished *g*.)
| Miko Jasmine chapter 14 . 2/16/2009
I really enjoyed the whole story but wish it had ended a little differently. Great job on your 1st multi-chap fic! -
| calcium77 chapter 13 . 2/16/2009
Yeah! Another chapter! Hey, is it done? It seemed kind of done? But it did not say 'end' or complete?
Loved the story! Favorite stuff was in the middle when Sam was kidnapped. Great job with their relationship and keeping the story interesting!
So...new story soon :-)
| calcium77 chapter 12 . 2/3/2009
Wow! I saw this in my inbox this morning and was totally shocked! I kind of had given up on you :-) Sorry about that!
Thanks so much for continuing! I am so happy you are! The story was just kind of hanging out of there for me. I am happy I will be getting closure :-)
Loved the chapter! Thanks for saying that the chapter was for me :-)
| Harrigan chapter 12 . 2/3/2009
Glad you came back to finish this! You have such a nice readable writing style, it's a pleasure to indulge in this fic!
| JenF chapter 12 . 2/3/2009
Loving this story. Great plot, great characterization and great dialogue. Waiting patiently for the last chapter :)
| spinners0end chapter 11 . 11/18/2008
The plot thickens! As in, a lot! Looking forward to the next update. And if you need some revising help, drop me a line. I swear I'll actually respond this time. :)
| spinners0end chapter 10 . 11/18/2008
Oh, good. I was worried that you'd leave that plot line hanging - the bit about the two missing peeps. Not that I have that little faith in you - I just didn't know how you'd fit it in without taking a step backwards on the progress bar.