Reviews for Swim Team
twivampsalvatore chapter 22 . 8/25/2012
Great story :)
KaseyRae chapter 14 . 6/30/2012
'And that was when Edward chucked his stereo system at the wall.'

Ohmygod, laughing... so hard... LOL... :D
TopazGirl96 chapter 22 . 6/10/2012
I loved your story! It was amazing! :D
RobstenForever513 chapter 15 . 4/30/2012
Ok...I really like the story, and i'm only at chapter 15, but does anyone else find it weird how Bella is like half naked in front of everyone? Lol. I mean even in Breaking dawn the book, after she got changed, I mean they didn't like leave her there naked...Alice or another...girl...must have changed her. Like how is Rosalie so cool with her Emmett seeing Bella's breasts? How is Bella ok with Edward seeing her breasts? They havent even had sex...I'm sure I'll understand it more as i continue to read...but you could PM me for a few answers pleeease. Otherwise. I love the story:) Really love possessive-ward and jealous-ward
Rhianna chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Nice chapter and start to the story :) x
the devil's angelxx chapter 22 . 1/16/2011
what a good story! i loved it!

great job with it
sam chapter 12 . 6/26/2010
This story is ridiculous. So retarded.
tiff1986 chapter 22 . 6/12/2010
i loved it

your a very good writer

just beautiful
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 22 . 1/4/2010
I love the ending. I'm sad that it is over. That was the best story ever.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 21 . 1/4/2010
Uh Oh. Not good. For Bella that is. I want more, please?
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 20 . 1/4/2010
Man, and Bella was going to win too.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 19 . 1/4/2010
Keep going.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 18 . 1/4/2010
Love it.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 17 . 1/4/2010
Bella once again passed out. I love this story.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 16 . 1/4/2010
Poor Bella. I hope Edward calms down soon.
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