Reviews for Swim Team
Guest chapter 19 . 5/3/2016
Is she remembering where she drown and Jacob rescue her?
Guest chapter 13 . 5/2/2016
Will rosalie be able to help?
Guest chapter 5 . 5/2/2016
Is she ok? She fainted
Guest chapter 3 . 5/2/2016
They didn't leave again did they?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
Your making edward sound like a bad guy
twivampsalvatore chapter 22 . 8/25/2012
Great story :)
KaseyRae chapter 14 . 6/30/2012
'And that was when Edward chucked his stereo system at the wall.'

Ohmygod, laughing... so hard... LOL... :D
TopazGirl96 chapter 22 . 6/10/2012
I loved your story! It was amazing! :D
RobstenForever513 chapter 15 . 4/30/2012
Ok...I really like the story, and i'm only at chapter 15, but does anyone else find it weird how Bella is like half naked in front of everyone? Lol. I mean even in Breaking dawn the book, after she got changed, I mean they didn't like leave her there naked...Alice or another...girl...must have changed her. Like how is Rosalie so cool with her Emmett seeing Bella's breasts? How is Bella ok with Edward seeing her breasts? They havent even had sex...I'm sure I'll understand it more as i continue to read...but you could PM me for a few answers pleeease. Otherwise. I love the story:) Really love possessive-ward and jealous-ward
Rhianna chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Nice chapter and start to the story :) x
the devil's angelxx chapter 22 . 1/16/2011
what a good story! i loved it!

great job with it
sam chapter 12 . 6/26/2010
This story is ridiculous. So retarded.
tiff1986 chapter 22 . 6/12/2010
i loved it

your a very good writer

just beautiful
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 22 . 1/4/2010
I love the ending. I'm sad that it is over. That was the best story ever.
Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 21 . 1/4/2010
Uh Oh. Not good. For Bella that is. I want more, please?
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