Great story!

Luvvvv this story it is short but really good

good stuff!

My name is PEGGY OSCAR from USA, I never believed in love spells or magic until i met this grate spell caster a grate man called Dr Lugard, on internet were people were testifying about the grate work that he has done for them bringing back there ex lover and also saving them from a virus called Herpes Simplex and HIV and i decided to give him a try and believe me he did it for me. I meant a man who’s name is DOCTOR LUGARD he is really powerful and could help cast spells to bring back one’s gone, lost, misbehaving lover and magic money spell or spell for a good job or luck spell .I’m now happy & a living testimony cos the man i had wanted to marry left me 3 weeks before our wedding and my life was upside down cos our relationship has been on for 3years. I really loved him, but his mother was against us and he had no good paying job. So when i met this spell caster, i told him what happened and explained the situation of things to him. At first i was undecided, skeptical and doubtful, but i just gave it a try. And in 3 days my ex lover came back to me, my boyfriend (now husband) called me by himself and came to me apologizing that everything had been settled with his mom and family and he got a new job interview so we should get married. I didn’t believe it cos the spell caster only asked for my name and my boyfriends name and all i wanted him to do. Well we are happily married now and we are expecting our little kid, and my husband also got the new job and our lives became much better. His email is OR You can also call him on these Mobil number 2347037098000 also on Watsap now.

GETTING YOUR EX LOVER BACK.
WINNING LOTTERIES.
CHILD BEARING.
BREAKING OF GENERATION COURSE.
GETTING OF JOB.
JOB PROMOTION.
MONEY SPELL.
SPIRITUAL PROTECTION.
HERBAL CARE.
BEAUTY SPELL.
Death Spell

Hi, thanks for this lovely story. This is the second time I have read it and have enjoyed it just as much this time.

I found a typo while reading about one third of the way down chapter 4.

Can you please find Daphne and quietly tell her so no one else hears, than I'm in our dinner place and need her to come and that it's urgent.

the word 'than I'm in our dinner place' should be 'that I'm in our dinner place'

Thanks again for the story.

Really felt that this story was happening and I was just getting pulled along for the ride, job well done

A male head of school is Heasmaster and a female is Headmistres. Therefore Professor McGonagall is Headmistress.

Excellent story! Very nicely done!

I liked the story up until a point in this chapter. Then the story got too tedious/repetitive. Daphne and Harry basically discuss what they want to do, then the scene happens a few paragraphs later. That's what it seemed to me at that point.

I sort of hate titles, like Daphne as the Ice Queen or Snape as the Prince when the person is being referenced, but other than that, and one more issue, twas a pretty good chapter. That one glaring issue that made me want to comment on this chapter instead of reviewing the story at the end as a whole is your description of Harry saving Daphne from a fate worse than death. Not that rape isn't. But the fact that Harry saved her from it. Honestly, if she defeated Draco's minions so easily, she probably could've taken Draco out herself too.

You know what would be really badass. Take a muggle tranquilizer gun and replace the sedatives with Drought of Living Death shots or some crazy ass basilisk venom or dementor's blood potion. Maybe find a charm that would increase the velocity of the darts. And it all of a sudden becomes a magically lethal CO2 powered potion gun.

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story, my only regret is that it did not take longer :)

Loved it! Some funny bits, you didn't go overboard with Ron Dumbles or Molly bashing but you recognized they all had issues and were not perfect. I liked how described Ginny, she does have it hard. And I am glad you recognized Neville, hes a brilliant friend who dosn't get enough credit in the books. How Harry dealt with Voldemort was brilliant, and I'm finding it very hard to pick a fault with any aspect of the story.

It was short, but it was completely awesome. Marvelous job on this fic! Congrats on completing it!

I normall review every chapter of a fic i read, but this fic is very well written and i look forward to reading what else youve written