| Reviews for Turning Dust into Gold |
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   calsax chapter 22 . 10/2/2009 Interesting developements between Rose and Emmett |
| mugglemom08 chapter 19 . 10/1/2009 I've been trying to get Edward's plan to make sense to me, and it just isn't. Why wouldn't he and Emmett just 'fess up to the bet? Teenage boys have been known to do stupid stuff like that. After Rose ripped both of them new ones, she'd probably be able to get over it and move on. I do like the BxE and RxEm storylines (Jasper's bugging the ever-loving shit out of me right now; poor Alice); you've done a fabulous job with the chemistry between the characters. |
| mugglemom08 chapter 18 . 10/1/2009 Three cheers for Naughty Bella! |
| calsax chapter 21 . 10/1/2009 Loved the Bella and Edward scene, but Jasper...*shakes head* |
| calsax chapter 20 . 10/1/2009 Well, I still don't think it's okay for Jasper to play around with Alice but you have to resolve the situation somehow. |
| calsax chapter 19 . 10/1/2009 Okay, Jasper has officially and royally pissed me off. |
| mugglemom08 chapter 15 . 10/1/2009 There was pretty much no sight on earth that could compare to the way he looked right now. Parts of his gorgeous bronze hair stood completely up on end, as if he'd just finished running those long fingers through it, and his eyes were fully-lidded and still a bit sleepy-then my eyes drifted lower and heard the hallelujah chorus begin as I took in the impressive erection he was unsuccessfully trying to hide in those tasty shorts. M...break out the smelling salts, I do believe I feel a little faint. "That's it, Bella," Rosalie sneered, her patience ending, "you're not allowed to conduct this investigation because you clearly don't have the balls for it." *snort* And I'm sure Edward's very happy about Bella's lack of ballage. Or at least he will be. ;) All I wanted was to drag him to the floor and slam that rock hard cock deep inside of me. Sounds like a plan to me. |
| calsax chapter 18 . 10/1/2009 Well...:) |
| calsax chapter 17 . 10/1/2009 Good chapter. |
| calsax chapter 16 . 10/1/2009 Glad some of the tension between Rosalie and Emmett has dissipated. |
| calsax chapter 15 . 10/1/2009 Excellent writing! |
| calsax chapter 14 . 10/1/2009 What an ending to the chapter! Fabulous! |
| mugglemom08 chapter 12 . 10/1/2009 It's a nice change to have Jasper as the socially awkward one instead of Edward. |
| mugglemom08 chapter 11 . 10/1/2009 She looked ready to either kick his ass or jump him right on the table. *snort* Knowing Rose, she'd do both. Only question is whether the ass-kicking would come before or after the jumping. |
| calsax chapter 13 . 10/1/2009 Kinky dream sequence. You're definitely building up the romantic tension in this fic. |