Reviews for Turning Dust into Gold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i see rosalie and alice paying bella back by setting her up with edward lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely i love how she was going to call him for help but he beat her to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love alice when shes all spitfire |
![]() ![]() ![]() what is bella up to...so she hasnt met Edward before which means their relationship will be new love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i love emmett |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the last line its funny since in twilight the cullens are vamps lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() bravo! great story and the epilogue was a satisfying end. definitely enjoyed your writing style and creativity. didn't feel rushed like many ff stories are; glad you took some time for character/story development. looking forward to more from you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() holy damn what i wouldn't give to have that happen to me at work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow the last part of that chap was PAINFUL, painful in a really good way because i was physically cringing like crazy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ok i must admit, i think i'm more attracted to your edward cullen than the "real" one... excellent story thus far. love how you aren't afraid to spend some time on details. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. I think in the middle, your characters fell a bit flat... but you worked hard to resolve it in the end. I think I like the ending - the big grand gesture. Who doesn't swoon a little for that. I really enjoyed your writing style. Clearly I am writing like a 12 year old right now... sorry. But I think you worked through a great idea, a really tough concept - the sense of unworthiness... and yes we get that all through the twilight books, but you've made it your own. Great job, keep up the writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow! That was hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is beautiful..office sex with hotward is the best! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story, but a strange place to end it...kind of unfinished. I don't see an epilogue either? Just author notes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWW 3 Totally worth sleepless night to read your story! xD |