Reviews for Turning Dust into Gold |
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![]() ![]() ![]() *fans self* *Hell runs around the room fanning everyone* There is something about a man with a loose tie ... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh those Cullen brothers ~ Whew! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only the second that has gotten inside Rosalie's head so I could see how she sees Emmett. Good intro. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story that kept me intrigued. Glad to know there is another part since this ended so abruptly. Really great writing on this fic. |
![]() ![]() I still don't get why Rosalie was mad that Emmett WAS married. He's divorced now so it shouldn't matter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Soooooooo, was Tanya the hairdresser also Tanya the ex-wife? That would be so weird if the answer was yes. Chapter 28 had me reaching for a tissue. For clever people they were all rather immature when it came to feelings and talking and just plain old common sense. Communication is something they all need lessons in. Nice read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story ill just read the epilogue ive read this story before but its well worth reading again ;) |
![]() ![]() Not sure what to write, but I definitely think you started off the fanfiction well. I wasn't too big of a fan of your portrayal of Bella. She was too ditzy and overthetop at times, but you seemed to nail Rosalie and her insecurities. I wish that the story wasn't too rushed - with them having a falling out and then all of a sudden making plans to reunite and put Jasper and Alice together and then them all having sexual tension and then all going out to eat and ... it was just too much. And all of a sudden all three couples are good, but they all have a falling out and each couple manages to get into a big argument- I think you had the potential to get to something really good, but it quickly went downhill from the middle of the chapter and on. Too quick emotions and whatnot. I felt like there was potential, which was what drove me to keep reading it but I am a bit disappointed at how everything turned out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I feel like I was transported back in time to emotionally stunted adolescents pretending to be adults. I just wanted to shake the whole cast of characters most of the time! I really think that they all need counceling and their communication issues are going to destroy the little bit that they've achieved. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Enjoyed your story, reuniting them 6 years after high school. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure I really understand why each of these relationships just fell apart? So Emmett had been married, six years away from Rosalie...and that's why she feels betrayed by him? If he's currently married, then yes...that is a problem. Pretty dramatic, asking to be let out roadside. Creative license. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) loved this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story, but it felt more like a R/E based story than a B/E. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovd d story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! Lol! The end of chapter two is perfect! God, it made me laugh hard! It was probably the most I've laughed since I saw Adam Sandler live! |