|Reviews for Intimacy and All That Jazz|
| Tanya Lilac chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
This just made the rounds in a forum I'm following and I'm on the verge of swearing.
The thematic ties are perfect; with the trio representing different, overlapping concepts that aren't exactly spelled out but referenced, for instance, the earth that Lee, as the sun sustains, can be taken to be Tenten. The string of vignettes that lead to the final prompt paint a picture that is nuanced and believable. I'm not sure what you're up to these days, but I sure as hell do hope you're still writing.
| electrobody chapter 1 . 12/9/2008
I liked it a lot, and the overall structure of the story. All of the characters to me, fell well into play as themselves. You captured them, fully in my opinion. This was beautiful in a subtle way. It was peaceful and eek.. I just loved it!
| jadedsiren chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Wow girl I liked that something god you'regoing on my author alert list Smile
| anthropomorphychan chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
I like Lee too ... but like most people I prefer a Neji/Ten. Stereotypical of me ... I know. *shrugs* But I have to admit, lately I've become fascinated with their team dynamics ... I suppose, recently I've been bored of just single, one on one pairings. The threesome thing spices up the story a bit. Nice job with the fic. Lee is such a sweet guy. *sigh*
| Takako's Revenge chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Wooh! Another ex A-leveller! Freedom is indeed a glorious thing...
This is a brilliant fic which really captures the essence of Team Gai. And you're right, there aren't enough fanfictions about Team Gai as a whole - and as much as I like NejiTen, the team is just so much more fun together. In your defence, I can certainly see LeeTenten, too, if anyone could convince him to just give the frig up on Sakura.
Can't wait to see more of your fics on this team, since you seem to have the dynamics down way more than a lot of other writers.
| Shenhui chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
nice.. very nice.. *smiles*
| reborn-23 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Well...damn. I can tell you weren't kidding when you said that you don't like Neji. You made him out to be such a jerk and gave him absolutely no love...
| Mysterious Bluerose chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
i love your story... the words are amazing... team gai is my favorite...and i do admit i do love neji and tenten as a couple...i will not bitch at u for liking tenten and lee... everyone has there own veiws on couples...sigh... i love lee though...he's so dang funny...
| Ally1313 chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Uum...I guess it was pretty sweet, though, please don't take this the wrong way, I don't see where the Neji romance part of it comes from. He really was just kinda thrown into to complete the set. I think this would be better put as a NejiTenLee friendship with LeeTen romance as compared to an OT3. You could also so switch it to the Lee and Tenten filter because I think it's a bit more appropriate than Neji and Tenten filters.
| Ayatsuri Sakkaku chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
"Team Gai’s not in love…
…except when they are."
I love that.
| Myself chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This was cute, I guess. Though, to me, it seemed more like a LeeTen story than a Team Gai love story. Like with the whole Tenten-and-Lee-snuggling-while-Neji-just-lied-there,-ignoring-them and Tenten sleeping with her head in Lee's lap, and all that stuff. So, if you were aiming for the LeeTen aspect of it, you pretty much succeeded, but for the while Neji part of it...well, not so much.
Neji really was just...there. Not getting any love. Like they were ignoring him and he was ignoring them.
So I guess you did the exact opposite of writing a NejiTen story since you hate the pairing so much...
Oh well, that's all.
| Hanai-kun chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Heh. This one's cute. xD
I really like NejiTenLee.. Well, LeeNejiTen actually. xD
And even more so LeeNeji.
I never really cared about Tenten, sorry. xD
But I like all of your fics about Team Gai. :D
I hope you write more about them.
| TaintedMoonlight chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I like Lee with Tenten better than Tenten with Neji as well. I think it's nicer and it makes more sense, but people really are adamant about NejixTenten.
Anyway, this is another nice piece. I'm glad you're uploading Team Gai fics. There really are so few of those. _
I'll go answer your poll now.