Reviews for Hopeless Case
shasta53 chapter 1 . 6/18/2009
You really did Charlie's POV well in this. I would love to see more of your work toward the end of NM when Edward returns.
piccolover22 chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
poor charlie i feel so sad for him but the writing was very good i love it :)
dwebb88 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Omg poor charlie...
Emillllllly chapter 1 . 5/18/2009
WOW. Oh my God. I will NEVER criticize Charlie again. Amazing!
M chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
I really sympathise with Charlie; he's actually one of my favorite human characters. Not a lot of people write a one-shot with Charlie POV, I'm glad you did.
Ms. Marauder-Cullen chapter 1 . 4/28/2009
OMC! Poor Charlie! This absolutely broke my heart! I feel as if my insides have been ripped out and shredded into pices now! That is how well I can feel Charlie's emotions in this. EXCELLENT JOB! I seriously think this needs a reward now, and I'm NOT kidding! I don't joke about this stuff. Ever. Trust me. Those last two paragraphs just... were like a knife to the heart, the final blow. Except they didn't put him out of his misery like a final blow should have, it only increased this pain. *sigh* Now I'm all deppressed. Oh well, it was worth it. Thanks for writting this!

P.S. Do you mind if I add a link to this on my profile so others can read it? Just checking. :)
Seth's Lover chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Oh my god. This is so perfect. I'm actually choked up right now, to be completely honest. Poor, poor Charlie... *sob*

I'm Favoriting this, by the way!
halconmia chapter 1 . 4/21/2009
This was so heartbreaking because you really don't stop and think about it from Charlie's pov. It had to be one of the most awful times of his life to have to see his daughter like that.
Bapuppydog chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
this story is haunting and deep and really heartwrenching...

beautifully written, the last lines really got to me

well done :)
ritz27 chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
great job done! keep it up!
W-VG chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
that was perfect. great job of capturing Charlie in that time.
Elanor123 chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
Nice to see this from Charlie's POV. Great job!
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 3/1/2009
i think im going to cry! this iz really sad!
Avaleigh1 chapter 1 . 2/15/2009
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I think you have nailed Charlie's character. Please tell me that you are doing something with your writing.
cassieburleson chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
that TRULY explained how charlie felt and i actually got angry at some of my friends who were like...charlie is being a bitch and all that and i was like...HIS DAUGHTER WAS PRACTICALLY NOTHING FOR MONTHS! what did you expect from him? to welcome edward into his home with open arms?

please...

that was great. i loved it.
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