Reviews for Not so Gentle Persuasion
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
it thin this is my fav itadei one-shot so far :D
Piinky-Giirl chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
Hello!

I think that you deserve much more than 13 reviews... So I'm writing one myself!

I really loved your Oneshot! And for the in-character-ness, you got it really right! They could've done this in the anime that it would've been okay!

And it's true that it's hard to make the characters in character during a yaoi scene, because, ordinarilly, there's not even the slightiest hint of love in the Akatsuki...

In fact, you did well!

Piinky-Giirl ~xx~
Cole-Hyuuga chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
wow amazin great job pure amazin dats de kind of stories i like ta read thank you so much i enjoyed readin it

Cole xoxo
McFucktruck chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
Love it!
mellie x chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
that is one of the best itadei yaois i have read its brilliant. good one its would be cool if you did a carry on (cnt a girl dream lol)
Nevervana chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
wow...this is...wow. possibly the most utterly perfect characterization job i've seen to date - particularly Hidan XD
Rewind.Replay.Repeat chapter 1 . 9/25/2008
Great story!
Utena-Puchiko-nyu chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
I like it!

Kisses from Argentina!
Princesse Sarah chapter 1 . 8/23/2008
I really liked your fic, but I think you maybe should've elaborated Deidara's feelings more at the end...

Deidei's time of the month... (lmao)
Samantai chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Amazing!

For the first Itadei fic I've ever read, this leaves a damn good impression!

X-Keep on writing!-X
Isa Knightwalker chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I really liked. Esp. the comment about how he only behaved when Sasori was around, which was true. And then the Itachi-bomb, and Itachi's paitent reactions to Deidara's furious outburts. I thought it was all very realistic. I loved the ending comment too, about how Deidara was obeying already. XD
Insertrandomusername chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
They were so not out of character 0.0 At least not Itachi... to be honest, I haven't seen Deidara in the anime, but for some reason, I know how he is... some manga, and my friend really likes him xD

But it was delicious Oo Really xD
LovelyMystery chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This is exactly what I like to see in a story :)
black55widow chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Nice job.
maria chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
boy

hot!

love it itachi was a sadistic bastard

keep it coming

ja ne