|Reviews for A Mother's Choice|
| Nousername1 chapter 11 . 6/23/2009
Fantastic job! I really feel like I got a good look inside Esme's head. It sounded so realistic, and you captured all the characters perfectly.
| BabelFish42 chapter 11 . 8/11/2008
Nice ending! You did a good job with this story, great portrayal of Esme!
| BabelFish42 chapter 10 . 8/11/2008
Interesting. Esme always seems so warm and gentle in the books. But I can totally imagine that she would be very dangerous if she felt her family was threatened. I'd never thought of that before... kudos to you for pointing it out!
| BabelFish42 chapter 9 . 8/11/2008
"Jasper ducked his head and mumbled, “Yes, ma’am.” "
Haha, aw Jasper. Even after everything that's happened to him, he's still a Southern gentleman. Good job on this chapter!
| BabelFish42 chapter 8 . 8/11/2008
"I may be the head of this family, but you are the heart. We would only be an odd coven with a strange diet if not for you."
Wow. That is a PERFECT way to describe Esme. Awesome line! Good chapter too :-)
| BabelFish42 chapter 7 . 8/11/2008
Haha, it sure would be useful to have someone with Jasper's powers around here sometimes. Nice chapter. I love when Edward calls Esme 'Mom."
| BabelFish42 chapter 6 . 8/11/2008
Aw, I love this part of Alice's and Jasper's story.
| BabelFish42 chapter 5 . 8/11/2008
Another good chapter. I love how you titled it "the Teddy Bear." What a perfect name for Emmett! :-)
| BabelFish42 chapter 4 . 8/11/2008
Esme's such a good mother, even to Rosalie. Talk about understanding, and unconditional love.
| BabelFish42 chapter 3 . 8/11/2008
Haha, I like how she assumed his companion must be his mate. :-) Very sweet chapter.
| BabelFish42 chapter 2 . 8/10/2008
Yay! Carlisle showed up. It's about time something good happened to Esme.
| BabelFish42 chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
... I can't even imagine how painful that would be. This was well-written as usual. And I never thought about the prolactin level stuff, that was interesting.
| cachstardust chapter 3 . 7/15/2008
Wow, I've not read another story that pointedly speaks about how Esme becomes such a compassionate figure; you can really see how much your own life experiences have played into your writing. Please continue!
| Boop55 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
OMG! All the chapeters are great! I know I'm bias
| Skullduggery Goodfellow chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
To make chapters go into documents and then do the browse thing. Then submit them. Now you go into stories. Chose your story, click Content/Chapters. Then you title the chapter and click -Select Document- Chose the file you just uploaded then click add. I highly recommend deleting all chapters but number one. To delete a chapter click 'del' then it reloads the page. Next click Yes.