Reviews for Dark Lord Rising |
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genie mann chapter 39 . 8/14 I like the story alot. I hope you return to it! |
pincho chapter 36 . 8/11 Tha Is was a horrid chapter. Characters are not acting as they did in previous chapters in order to cause some extra death and destruction, even Draco went from full bluster to public murderer with no real reason. Slytherin table isn't even next to griffindor so Harry didn't put his back just to their table but the other house tables as well with all of those kids sitting between the two tables. Voldyshorts has no reason or even suspicion about the wands, there was no graveyard fight, no locking of the wands, no one to even hint that the wands are Brother wands, yet he somehow knows? This story went from good to bad in two to three chapters. |
pincho chapter 25 . 8/10 Story was going great until you have a sane and rational Tom Riddle. It explains a bit why the story was abandoned. Not because the story is bad but it kinda paints you into a corner. How do a handful of misfits, under educated teens and nonmagicals defeat two dark lords without rediculous plot armor and holes? |
slytherinsal chapter 39 . 6/16 I hope you will get back to writing this |
slytherinsal chapter 10 . 6/16 this is the first fic I think I have read when the Grangers' security is taken so seriously. Nice job. |
DPinAK chapter 39 . 5/9 Just your story. Sorry it was abandoned. |
garvit.bansal234 chapter 39 . 5/3 fourth year was good but 5th year is stretching, sadly it got abandoned |
csheila chapter 7 . 7/25/2023 Tine to oush Dumbles hard. He would have no qualms about killing Hermione |
csheila chapter 3 . 7/25/2023 Thanks for an angst free discussion. I have read this many times and love it. |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 27 . 6/12/2023 Why would Voldemort give a damn about Sirius? It has NO bearings on his plans. (Plus, if he WANTED Sirius gone, he'd aim to kill him. Not do something that only helps dumbledore and does bothing for himself.) If he wanted to take a stab at Harry there are many FAR more efficient ways to do so. And why on EARTH would he think Sirius WOULD show up with Harry?! It makes NO sense! IF Harry runs there to save Sirius, they are not together. And by no logic should Sirius even KNOW where Harry was! That he did in the book was PURE CHANCE. And WHY does Hermione think the name of a GRAVESTONE would matter?! Odds are the stone was random. There was NO way to know which, IF ANY of them mattered. At all! And Harry was too busy trying to survive to read. When was the last time YOU panicked? And did YOU read a random billboard when you did? *Raises an eyebrow* This is what I meant when I said people seem to know more than they COULD have known. Also... Even IF Snape said Harry and Sirius was close, neither of them has ANY way of knowing that Sirius being free will in any way be better for Harry than him having to meet the man in secret. So why bother? It's a waste of resources. And Voldemort have biger fish to fry. |
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 24 . 6/12/2023 Why does everyone seem to magically know the motivation of everyone else WITHOUT using Legimency? And why do people ALWAYS arrive at the correct conclusion, even when said conclution is NOT obvious in any way? (Maybe it's obvious to someone who already knows the answer, but it's not obvious to anyone else Some are even very far-fetched.) |
Wise Lion 17 chapter 3 . 4/10/2023 Basically the Triwizard Tournament is the gladiator games of the Magical world. I've read what those events were like and boy let me tell you all I've never been happier when the Greeks invented the Olympics! |
FairyofProtection chapter 39 . 3/12/2023 That Inferi was Arrianna? |
Pat chapter 36 . 2/2/2023 A good story - shame it was never finished. |
flys36 chapter 17 . 1/21/2023 why did he send Hedwig, when they could have just talked on the mirrors? |