Reviews for Dark Lord Rising |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought this story started out quite well except for the fact that both harry and hermione unexplicably realized their undying love for for each other. Then bam: chapther 3; married, soul bound. I thought I would give it a chance and see if you could write better plot in something else then romance, which you clearly failed in the beginning. You could, somewhat. The only problem i have with the rest is that all characters are extremes. The characters you like have no bad sides and the ones you don't like have no good. It's a bit unrealistic. It's more of a caricature of canon. Well i'm giving this up at this point but hope that you continue writing and maybe i'll read your other storys, if you do. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it~ |
![]() ![]() great story, please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() In real life, runes and arithmancy (numerology, really) are far more involved with making predictions than divination ever was. PROPER divination covers a wide variety of subjects and efforts,. Scrying, clairvoyance, revealing hidden things, even finding water, all are under the purview of divination. Also, ascent is a gain in altitude. ASSENT is affirmation or agreement. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've never agreed with the "Dumbledore knows" idea. A ramble collection I read once put it best. When he said "ten dark and difficult years", he's specifically referring to having to live without magic. You have to remember, Dumbledore was born into a magical family, AS WAS HARRY. So...yeah. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did Draco get his hide-out wand when he was naked and thrown on the bed?Do hope you update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't honestly say I'm happy with how the Dursley's got off so light in spite of everything they've done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Actually, according to the Black Family Tree, it was Charlus Potter who married Dorea Black. Google it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to admit the first thing that popped into my head reading Albus' bleeping nonsense was a snarky question of "Oh I am sorry are you a vegan or something?". Honestly! Sorry good story and sadly I can see him being that insensitive to Harry as he is mainly viewed as Dumbles avatar carrying out what he wants with no thoughts or feelings of his own. Great story so far. |
![]() ![]() I LOVE THIS STORY! Poor Fawkes *shudders* please update soon! Love harry and hermione in this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() John and Annabelle are my favorite characters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() John Granger is a bad-ass. I've enjoyed the story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is awesome! Each individual piece seems to be coming together perfectly. Well, except for Remus turning into a Lycan. Though cool, it remains unexplained. Coming to grips with his affliction shouldn't by itself change him to this degree. I suggest a potions accident or a ritual he found and tried in the Black library. Easily more believable and fits well with his stated research. I do hope that you are still alive and able to continue this amazing story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn good story. I always like it when dumbledork and moldyshorts have some troubles with the paw ähm boy. its sad you didnt continue with this story. |