|Reviews for Gambling|
| Miss Late Bloomer chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Wow. It's a bit of twist that Lucky's being the practical party, but I think Josef's getting in deep with his favorite freshies. It would be interesting to see you explore his relationship with the others, to see the contrasts and the likenesses to his dealings with Lucky. Will he ever try to turn Lucky? We know that he was beginning to open up to the suggestion with Simone, but is Lucky in a different category? Either way I liked the mood you spun here...how it would shift from intense to light and back to intense again. I don't know how you continue to make this dynamic fresh and striking, but you do.
| miaz chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Sigh. Josef should just realize that his girls care about him...as he cares about them, and leave the guilt behind. Love it.
| nightcap chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
'I am very much not the man you think I am.'
Perfect line in the perfect place.
Just a few minutes in the middle of his day. This was so enjoyable.
| scrappyearnhardt chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
| moonjat54 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Your scenes with Lucky and Josef get better and better. She is so different and I like the way Josef responds to her. Sometimes rules are made to be broken, Josef should think on that.