Reviews for Salvation
xosummerxo chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
Good chapter a little short but overall good. Glad your making this into a story. Please continue
scrappyearnhardt chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
Kairi's-twin chapter 2 . 6/22/2008
Wow that was intense. i hope everything is okay! Poor Beth... Porr Josef he had to make a really tough decision really fast. I can't wait to read more you have totally grabbed my intrest.

keira666 chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
You should go on, it was great and left me wanting more.
LLevey chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Loved it :D

Nat D chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Oh my God! That was awsome! Yeah, you should go on!

I'ts very good!
Mamashirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
normal story... you have to continue!
p3karen chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
You cant leasve it there lol. more chapters please.
SouthernButterfly chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
I'm thinking you definitely need to make that a complete story! There are too many great directions you could take that situation in to leave it as a one-shot.

Go for it!
quietcritic chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Normal story, PLEASE! Great intro. Write more, please!
FaithfulLurker chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
A very good start. I can see this growing into a terrific multi-chapter fic. It might just be me, but I find Josef using words like "Sweetheart" and "Deary" very endearing, I love it! Well, again, good start, and I really hope you continue this because it has a very good plot. [:
scrappyearnhardt chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Micaburn chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Please make it a story! I love it
clairlz chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Well, you sure can't leave it there!

more would be nice.
xosummerxo chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
This was really good. I vote for a story because you can branch off you have Beth, turn out like Sarah, and Mick not forgiving Josef or you can maybe have Beth survive and Mick/Josef fight for Beth's love. Either way I would love for you to make this into a story..
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