Reviews for Susan Pevensie
christine the skittles chapter 1 . 2/13/2016
What a story! Oh, Susan, why did you take the way of the world when you were young, and had another chance?
hrhAcid chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
Extremely touching!I love this.
Spottedleaf7 chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
That was beautiful and elegant. Susan had a very, very sad life. I like how at the end she rejoins her deseased family and Caspian X, and she is Eighteen and young again. It makes me wonder if she is being given a second chance at life; a more happy life with Caspian and her family. The story brought tears to my eyes! Thank you for that wonderful work of art.

XxChinoninaxX chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
This is great! Keep up the good work!
ibelieveintruelove chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
That was beautiful :) Susan had such a sad life, but the end almost makes it worth it. I love how forgiving her siblings are, and that Caspian waited for her. Wonderful job!
nicetwomeetyou chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
this is wonderful, loved it
enjoylife1994 chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Oh. That was such a heart-warming story. I just mentioned I'll be reading your stories soon and I did. I was right, you are a good writer, prolly not just a good one but a great one. I didn't know you wrote Chronicles of Narnia fics. But I always admired whenever someone picked up from where CS Lewis left Susan. And I admire you for what you've done because you did excellent work with it. That was brilliant. I absolutely loved it. Again, keep up your good work :)
wonderlandbomb chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
I felt tears forming near the end, I've gotta say that I enjoyed reading this a lot!
MyLifeIsaSKnovel chapter 1 . 3/25/2010
VERY nice...I loved it.
BakerStreetIsLastRefugeOfHope chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
A great story. Very good.
xxxNOVAxxx chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
so elegant in structure. simply gorgeous, i am crying
Crosswood chapter 1 . 8/27/2009
I've read this story about three times now and every time I am amazed. If CS Lewis read this he would probably agree; this is how it went.

Cheers for writing this story down; Susan deserves a happy ending.
JOHN chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
josephineb chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
perfectly lovely, and very poignant. Great job!

MistyMorning chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
Oh my god, reading this and listening to The Call on repeat almost had me sobbing at the end! I teared up, this was so beautiful.
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