Reviews for Breakfast
Lady Emma Wentworth chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
This is fweety? Funny (picturing Ianto falling out of bed) and sweet (the heart in the coffee) - they're like an old couple who've been together for fifty years already, and looking forward to the next fifty!
milkteethbabydoll chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
I can't help but comment that in the duration of reading this I somehow managed to fall backwards off my bed and bash my head against the leather setee (that I will now be moving to the opposite side of my bedroom) so brilliantly placed right beside my nightstand. Putting the head trauma aside, it was actually quite funny. Just seemed a bit of coincidence considering the story...

Right, that's out of the way. I loved this! Very sweet. I like that Jack gets to see a side of Ianto most others haven't. Believe it or not, I actually find his lack of grace in the morning rather endearing. Not to mention so very, very cute. Oh, and great dialog as well! It hard to hit the mark with these two, but you did. Fabulously I might add.

Wonderful read. I hope to see more like this. -
rain angst chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Lol, Ianto rolls out of bed. This is made of cuteness, I love it. Great job!
thunderincrimson chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Ow this was so sweet! Any chance of having more Janto fluff like this? XD
sexybeardedlover chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
i do feel all warm and fuzzy! yay! love and stuff...
heartfallen chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
That was so sweet
Galadriel1010 chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Aw, fuzzies! I love the way you've got Jack looking after Yan for a while, and their sheer fuzziness, very very cute
doctor-who-fangirl chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
hotflower901 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
This gave me warm fuzzies. I just love fluffy
Solsbury Girl chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Mornings shouldn't be permitted to start until around 11.00am. Just call me Ianto. I really liked the humour in the situation.

But,you asked for concrit - so here's mine (I hope you really, really wanted it, and that after the exam stress you won't just melt into a heap)...

The one thing I thought was slightly awry - perhaps careless - was when you said the first time Jack witnessed Ianto's morning routine he "tried desperately to ease him back into bed with a hot water bottle or something."

For me, the "or something" just doesn't sit well. "Or something" seems like a bit of a cop out - you are looking to the reader to supply the detail that the writer ought to have furnished.

But its only a tiny thing.

And good luck with the exam results.
Wake-up Soon chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Aw, cute.

No, adorable.
pinksocks chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
hehe, don't you just love Janto fluff. Anyways, to the point. I absolutely hate exams with a passion too, and I always have the same problem. I thought it was good, because i know how hard it is to try and write something when you have writers block. Its an interesting take too, because eveyone just assumes that Ianto is a morning person. Well done fr sticking your neck out, so to speak.

Jennie-x chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
That was so cute. I loved it.. Ianot sounds a bit like me in the mornings lol
strgzr chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
First,I know you're not going to believe this, but there will come a time when you'll wish the worst thing you had to worry about were exams. Try to enjoy this time.

Secone, lots of warm fuzzies as a reward for a sweet story. I really enjoy seening Ianto a little less than perfect and it's always nice to see Jack taking care of him. Thanks
gaia-x-goddess chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
This was really good. I'd love Ianto to give ME a heart coffee...

Loved it.

Hope you lose your writers block so you can write more like this :)


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