Reviews for Pretty Lady
teacupz chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
the description is one of a kind, :3

but, I guess you use a too complicated phrases for the story which contains Hugh's POV that should be more... em, innocent? maybe? O.o -not sure after all- -get kikced-

hope you will write more! :)
RWT chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
Aw...poor Lu and Hugh. it was adorable in one sense but terribly sad too since the kid has no idea what's really up and thta no one wants to explain to him.
The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Aw... Hughy! This was so bittersweetly adorable. (I really did say "aw" aloud.) I loved it, and I especially loved hwo it was from Hugh's POV. And Lumina's a pretty lady...oh, I want to hug that kid. He's so cute in this!

Great work. No, really. Awesome work.
Moonlit Dreaming chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
That was so cute! I think you captured Hugh's personality perfectly and wrote from his POV very convincingly. Good work!
SoSheWaltzes chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Wow! This was wonderful! I loved it. :) How old is Lumina supposed to be in this? Nah, it doesn't matter. Oh, it was so sweet. Hugh was adorable.
SugarTea chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
That was insanely cute. . I think you really captured the emotions and thoughts that a young boy would feel at this age. And as a plus it's in character. :] Nicely done. :D