Reviews for Forever
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
A great story. Very well written.
ForeverAGnome chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Whooaa! Creepy! You should write more about them although I'm not sure where you could go from here. Maybe bring Collette's family into play. Do like a 10 years later sort of thing and have Molly staying with Collette's family. Maybe. Ionno. I'd like to see more though!
Bloody Rose 2 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
'COLLETTE AND MOLLY ARE 16 AND THEY HAVE A HOUSE IN THE WOODS WITH A CLEARING AND LAKE A MILE FROM THE HOUSE WHICH HAS 2 BEDROOMS AND 1 HAS NO WINDOWS SO ONE DAY THEY DECIDE GO FOR A WALK IN THE PARK THAT IS A GOOD 6 MILES FROM THE HOUSE ITS 5 MILES TO THE TOWN WHILE ITS JUST A MILE TO THE PARK BUT THEY LIKE GOING THREW THE TOWN SO WHEN THEY GET THERE THEY SEE A BIG WOLF [WITH PAWS THE COLOR OF BLOOD THAT STOPS AT THE KNEE. AND SILVER FUR WITH BLACK STRIKS DOWN THE SIDES AND BACK AND TEAL GREEN EYES] LAYING ON THE SAND WHEN IT SEES THEM IT LIFTS ITS HEAD AND THEY GO CLOSER WHEN THERE 4 FEET AWAY IT GETS UP AND GOES UP TO THEM AND SAYS IT WILL NOT HURT THEM AND THAT ITS NAME IS HOLLY SO AFTER A WHILE MOLLY AND COLLETTE GO HOME AND HOLLY FOLLOWS THEM THEN THEY SEE SOMEONE IS LAYING ON THE SIDEWALK SO HOLLY, MOLLY AND COLLETTE RUN OVER TO SEE IF THEY CAN HELP WHEN THEY GET TO THE PERSON HOLLY SAYS THAT THE PERSON IS A VAMPIRE AND THAT HE IS HURT REALLY BAD AND TELLS THE GIRLS THAT THE ONLY WAY TO SAVE HIM IS TO GIVE HIM BLOOD AND AFTER HOLLY SAYS THAT MOLLY SAYS SHE'LL HELP SO SHE PULLS OUT A POCKET KNIFE AND CUTS HER WRIST AFTER A MINUTE OR TWO THE KID STARTS TO WAKE UP SO HE HEALS HER WOUND AND TELLS HER HIS NAME IS MAT AND THAT HIS FAMILY WAS KILLED AND HE HAS NO PLACE TO GO SO HOLLY ASKS IF HE CAN DO TRANSFIGUREATIONS MAT SAYS HE CAN TURN INTO

[A WOLF, A LAB, A CAT, A TIGER, A BAT, A FOX, A PUPPY AND A KITTEN] SO MOLLY ASKS HIM TO TRANSFORM INTO A PUPPY AND WITH A POOF! SOUND SHE LOOKS WHERE MAT WAS AND FINDS A CUTE LITTLE PUPPY WITH BLOOD RED FUR AND SILVER EYES SO HOLLY COMES OVER AND PICKS UP MAT AND HANDS HIM TO MOLLY AND SO THEY START WALKING HOME BY THE TIME THEY GOT BACK IT WAS ALMOST MIDNIGHT SO MOLLY AND COLLETTE GO TO BED SO THEY WENT TO THEIR ROOM AND HOLLY AND MAT FOLLOWED AND WHAT THEY SAW BROUGHT A SMILE TO EACH OF THEIR FACES TWO SEPARET BEDS IN ONE ROOM SO HOLLY WENT TO THE COUCH IN THE BEDROOM AND LAID DOWN ON IT MAT FOUND A CHAIR IN THE SAME ROOM AND SLEEP ON IT' IF YOU WANT TO USE IT YOU CAN I PUT A LOT OF WORK IN IT BUT WHATEVER JUST KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK
MoonTideMyth chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
I am very frightened at the moment I keep looking over my shoulder to make sure Collette is not there. I think it's awesome! Very eerie but great! It would make a cool movie or something! Later

-Blue