Reviews for The Wraith of the Shinigami
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 9h
that was good keep the chapters coming
Breakerp16 chapter 1 . 9/9
Not cats!

Also, good first chapters, I usually don't like made up bloodlines, but this is well crafted and not obnoxious, overpowered or a Dojutsu (God I'm tired of those.)
HauntingTheNet chapter 8 . 1/5
Another great story that sadly appears to be 9 years dead. At least I was able to read what was available.

As an aside, at some point you will want to go back and edit these chapters. There are a lot of typos through these 8 chapters. accept vs except, defiantly vs definitely, higher vs hire, since vs sense, etc. along with some other typos here and there.
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 10/26/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
heartbell chapter 1 . 9/19/2017
get tora to practice on it will be good for the whole village
Guest chapter 8 . 6/22/2017
My boy(or my grill) you gotta bring this fire story back. I don't care if it's a remake or just continuing this story but you just have to bring it back. Storyline was dope and the fact that it was Naruto x Koyuki just made it 100x better than many other stories.
fullygospel chapter 1 . 5/16/2017
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Dragonman109 chapter 8 . 3/1/2017
Update soon please.
SpencerDorman chapter 8 . 2/20/2017
I love the story, and I can't wait for more chapters. I would usually write more in the review of the latest chapter, but my minds kind of drawing a blank when it comes to what to write. Sorry.
SpencerDorman chapter 7 . 2/20/2017
I like the name "Ladies from Hades"; unfortunately, the Ninja World hasn't a single clue who Hades is.
SpencerDorman chapter 2 . 2/20/2017
It's obvious, but the whole of the Uchiha clan did not deserve to be slaughtered simply because of the actions of one man. I understand why it happened, and that that why revolves around the fact that it happened during a time when people simply wanted vengeance and someone to blame, but that doesn't mean that I have to be happy that it happened or agree with it.
SpencerDorman chapter 1 . 2/19/2017
Does Naruto's vitality-absorption and transference ability only affect someone's life force, or can it also affect other things alongside that? Like, can it absorb chakra, of which is added to the user's own, restoring depleted reserves or even increasing maximum capacity if already full? Or possibly even absorb other bloodlines, of which the user will then have access to and be able to use? The absorption of chakra or even bloodlines would obviously have to be absorbed only upon the death of the original owner, as acquiring bloodlines with a simple touch and the absorption of a little of someone's life force would make the ability way more OP than the alternative.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/29/2016
I wish you had continued Wraith. It would have been interesting to see where you went with it & I bet Tsunade's or Naruto's revenge on the bartender would have been sadistically funny & freaking well deserved.
JonV0 chapter 8 . 9/22/2016
Just discovered this story yesterday and was hooked. I'd be interested to see where this would eventually go, but I know that with how old this story is any creativity you have in regards to Naruto is probably going into Wisdom Written in the Blood right now. Even so, if you ever have the inspiration again I would love to see more of this.
Stratos263 chapter 3 . 12/26/2015
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