|Reviews for FLY|
| Barcavolio chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
This is one of the very few Ben/Nellie stories I actually like, and you also managed to reduce me to tears with it.
| ConfusedColumbia26220 chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
*Mouth hangs open in shock and awe* That was BEAUTIFUL! Very depressing. I got so far without crying, but once I knew she was going to jump - the first tear fell, then more followed! OMG! You should write more like this! This was so good! Sweeney loves her after all! Benjamin loved her! The only thing I wonder is when Lucy came into the picture and messed everything up, that's what I wonder. This was so good, and beautiful, and tragic, and sad! It's amazing! I hope you write more! You must write more stories like this! They're beautiful! (I think this is THE LONGEST review I've written in my history of reviews!) But GOD you're good! I love this! I wouldn't change a thing about it, really. Write more soon. :D :'(
| Ryoko368 chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
That was excellent!
| SamanthaSavvy chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
this made me cry! it was so good. beyond brilliant. i swear you have a talent. :']
it was so sad, but such an ah-mazing ending, & the song went PERFECTLY with the story. the ending i geussed that they obth died happy in the ocean, which is so sweet, but just a sad thing. lol. i'm still crying. this was just amazing. i luv your work, hope to see more of your sutff!
A MILLION KUDOS! no no, correction: INFINITY kudos! haha