Reviews for A Lucky Man
nanciellen chapter 1 . 4/11/2014
Great writing and creativity. Thoroughly enjoyed this. Thank You : )
sad sabrin chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
ha ha ha
poor mr bennet
i feel pitty for him
Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
CarolineThomas Alexander Thomas, Jacob Theodore, Laura Caroline, Emily Claire and Alice Louisa

ElizabethWilliam Eleanor Elizabeth, Thomas George and Bennet Fitzwilliam
Sapphire Dawn chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
Love this story.
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Lol! Good for Mr. Darcy... but poor Mr Bennet. ;)
paulineta chapter 1 . 2/9/2010
Oh life chances!

It was hilarious!
MayGirl85 chapter 1 . 10/6/2008
Bwahahahahahahah! Friggen awesome.
ellequoi chapter 1 . 9/27/2008
Cute idea but mistaken in some premises. If you'd said Mr Collins, all would be well (and quite hilarious!). However, Mr Bennet is irrevocably married through P&P, and I didn't catch a mention of his being widowed in your story. The Victorians may have supported marrying to protect one's honour, but not to someone already married
McPhantom chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Such a great story. and I love their son's name! I always wanted that to be their son's name hah. That made my day.
BarbaraP chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Very cute! i really enjoyed your story.
Magna Parva chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
insanely hilarious! _
Caty Jane chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Love the different spin! What an interesting and hilarious concept!
TwilightStarLaughter chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
wow...that's just, strange. I feel so bad for Mr. Bennet, lol. Strange but this was funny in its own way.
karmencorn chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Witty and fun.

I usually prefer stories with a little more dialog, but as a quick one-shot this works really well.

The only constructive suggestion I can offer: In paragraph 5, the voice changes from first person (Darcy referring to himself as "I") to third person (Darcy is referred to by his name). But the switch back is quick, so the overall effect isn't confusing.

Thanks for sharing your clever story!