Reviews for The Present
RobsessedTwihard51386 chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
Please update! Pllleeeeaaaasssseeeee! I wanna read about the other wedding:)))
Booksandmusic19 chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
Aww, it was so sweet! I almost cried... :)
anne96 chapter 3 . 1/31/2009
why don't you keep writing?
christinemarie13 chapter 3 . 8/25/2008
Great writing. It's always refreshing to find writers that have good grammar, spelling, etc. I think this was really cute and romantic. The meadow seems like a dream place. The twinkle lights on the trees and the trickling stream. Just so beautiful. A dream honeymoon for anyone. :)
Phantom-writer3739 chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
i liked it!


there i reviewed!
asounyhc chapter 2 . 7/17/2008
WAOOH ! so beautiful

so great chapter .
asounyhc chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Your writing style is amazing, it's exactly like that I imagine Edward acting

I love your story, it's sweet !
sisceal chapter 3 . 7/2/2008
Absolutely LOVE it! Please continue! :D
LondonsLegend chapter 3 . 7/2/2008
This was a really good story. I'm kind of surprised because I didn't think it would be that good based on the shortness of it, but it was really good! Oh, and in your profile, Darren Shan wrote Vampire Mountain. : )
hamistasty chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
i have to say,

that was a good lemon. Not vulgar like the other lemons i've read.

nice job )
Jackiswhack chapter 3 . 6/27/2008


sweetest fanfic ever. but i am probaly just syaign that because i am so emotional right now. You captured the essence of edward perefectly while still throwing in a few off beat remarks. It was SO good.

your amazing
DelilahTCullen chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
i really liked this story it was cute!
The.Devious.Miss.Caity chapter 3 . 6/26/2008
love it... wht a romantic idea
mimiprettyeyes chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
That was so beautiful. Please update? Soon?

haha Thank you
hamistasty chapter 2 . 6/22/2008

i love it ))
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