|Reviews for The Present|
| RobsessedTwihard51386 chapter 2 . 8/25/2012
Please update! Pllleeeeaaaasssseeeee! I wanna read about the other wedding:)))
| Booksandmusic19 chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
Aww, it was so sweet! I almost cried... :)
| anne96 chapter 3 . 1/31/2009
why don't you keep writing?
| christinemarie13 chapter 3 . 8/25/2008
Great writing. It's always refreshing to find writers that have good grammar, spelling, etc. I think this was really cute and romantic. The meadow seems like a dream place. The twinkle lights on the trees and the trickling stream. Just so beautiful. A dream honeymoon for anyone. :)
| Phantom-writer3739 chapter 3 . 8/22/2008
i liked it!
there i reviewed!
| asounyhc chapter 2 . 7/17/2008
WAOOH ! so beautiful
so great chapter .
| asounyhc chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Your writing style is amazing, it's exactly like that I imagine Edward acting
I love your story, it's sweet !
| sisceal chapter 3 . 7/2/2008
Absolutely LOVE it! Please continue! :D
| LondonsLegend chapter 3 . 7/2/2008
This was a really good story. I'm kind of surprised because I didn't think it would be that good based on the shortness of it, but it was really good! Oh, and in your profile, Darren Shan wrote Vampire Mountain. : )
| hamistasty chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
i have to say,
that was a good lemon. Not vulgar like the other lemons i've read.
nice job )
| Jackiswhack chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
sweetest fanfic ever. but i am probaly just syaign that because i am so emotional right now. You captured the essence of edward perefectly while still throwing in a few off beat remarks. It was SO good.
| DelilahTCullen chapter 3 . 6/27/2008
i really liked this story it was cute!
| The.Devious.Miss.Caity chapter 3 . 6/26/2008
love it... wht a romantic idea
| mimiprettyeyes chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
That was so beautiful. Please update? Soon?
haha Thank you
| hamistasty chapter 2 . 6/22/2008
i love it ))