Reviews for Little Men: My Best Friends
Clair Lawson chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
I really like this fanfic but there are a few parts I think you could change to make it even better. :) You are a little too modern in your language ( I don't think Nat would even know the word chic or use the term, girlfriend) Your knowledge of the age they all came to the school is off, though I do love that you had the characters knowing eachother from the beginning of their school careers. And they wouldn't have separated their schools as we do toady. We have elementary, middle and high school but they usually only had one classroom for all the students or they might have split it into the older and younger classes. Last thing, I don't think Nat would write so much about Dan liking Bess and vice versa. I think he would have written more about the things they, as a group,did together. I really don't mean to sound mean because I really did love your story I just thought you might like to hear someone else's opinion on your work. Keep writing. You have a knack for it. :D
Elisa Cristine De La Torre chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Keep it up