|Reviews for Rising from the Ashes|
| Yuri-hime chapter 17 . 1/12
Damn...you're Illusive Man is a scary mother f***er o.o
| Yuri-hime chapter 16 . 1/12
And there's the fluff I was just missing! :D
Also really liked that line from Aleena about running through a suddenly opened-for-you-door, and not being able to stop. Good food-for-thought words :3
| Yuri-hime chapter 15 . 1/12
I admit, I miss the fluff :)
| Yuri-hime chapter 9 . 1/12
You fixed Shepard's 'Captain/Commander' thing, then took away the Normandy in exchange for the 'Victory' :p
It's going to take some getting used to; this *complete* shift from even remote canon plot, but I'm a girl who dearly loves a good AU. I'm in for the long haul with this story ;3
| Yuri-hime chapter 8 . 1/12
Loved the 'something blue' line ;3
A quick note, has anyone mentioned to you at all that the title of this chapter needs a little editing, because 'True Minds' is spelled as 'Ture Minds' :p
As a last note, I must say that this is the single most beautiful, detailed, and amazing wedding/bonding/joining ceramony between Liara and Shepard I've ever had the pleasure to read :D
| NFBMPred chapter 9 . 1/3
By the reading of the ranks she demoted Shepard LT-Com is higher then captain
| Yuri-hime chapter 4 . 12/30/2013
Wow...if only this had been the story of how the ME series actually progressed. My only small 'issue' with this *vastly* more entertaining and gripping plot over canon is Shepard being a 'Captain' now instead of a Commander. She will always be a 'commander' to me no matter what title she ever gets :p
Absolutely fabulous story and plot otherwise :)
| Yuri-hime chapter 3 . 12/30/2013
*is just absolutely melting over this story, with the biggest damn grin on my face from chapter one onward* Is there any way for me to fave this story *twice* XD
| Yuri-hime chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
I LOVE THIS STORY!
That is all ;3
| Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I liked all the different shifting points of view. Very interesting story so far :)
| LinkedTortoise chapter 9 . 12/13/2013
The size of the Victory (825 m long, 426m wide, 243 m deep) is extremely large for a frigate class ship for canon Mass Effect. Most size estimates of the Normandy SR-2 put it at 200 to 300 m long and the canon codex states dreadnoughts are 800 - 1000m long and cannot land on planets. Have you increased the size of all ships across the entire setting or is this just an oversight?
Very enjoyable read so far.
| Kasanra chapter 50 . 10/21/2013
I'm finally finished and I can't wait to get to the sequel. Epic story.
| Kasanra chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
I really really like this story but sometimes you have these bracket things beside words[like this] and it really breaks the story. (hahaha you also did something like this :p)
It didn't happen in this chapter -only- but this one really drew me in and I kept stumbling over those bracket[things]. (:p)
| LitNiche chapter 50 . 7/7/2013
Absolutely captivating and well done. I hope you write professionally and if you do not, that you will consider doing so.
| Negrath chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
Just felt like I had to comment on the navigator being a 'diehard' terra firma man. Where would one get that idea? I do not believe he looked at those with anything but the dismissal one gives football bullies. And then there's the little pad in the wreck of sr-1...
Maybe at first, but once saren bit the dust, I'm sure he cut up and burned his membership card.
There. Good to have it out of my system. :)