Reviews for Rising from the Ashes
Yuri-hime chapter 17 . 1/12're Illusive Man is a scary mother f***er o.o
Yuri-hime chapter 16 . 1/12
And there's the fluff I was just missing! :D
Also really liked that line from Aleena about running through a suddenly opened-for-you-door, and not being able to stop. Good food-for-thought words :3
Yuri-hime chapter 15 . 1/12
I admit, I miss the fluff :)
Yuri-hime chapter 9 . 1/12
It's...different XD
You fixed Shepard's 'Captain/Commander' thing, then took away the Normandy in exchange for the 'Victory' :p
It's going to take some getting used to; this *complete* shift from even remote canon plot, but I'm a girl who dearly loves a good AU. I'm in for the long haul with this story ;3
Yuri-hime chapter 8 . 1/12
Loved the 'something blue' line ;3
A quick note, has anyone mentioned to you at all that the title of this chapter needs a little editing, because 'True Minds' is spelled as 'Ture Minds' :p
As a last note, I must say that this is the single most beautiful, detailed, and amazing wedding/bonding/joining ceramony between Liara and Shepard I've ever had the pleasure to read :D
NFBMPred chapter 9 . 1/3
By the reading of the ranks she demoted Shepard LT-Com is higher then captain
Yuri-hime chapter 4 . 12/30/2013
Wow...if only this had been the story of how the ME series actually progressed. My only small 'issue' with this *vastly* more entertaining and gripping plot over canon is Shepard being a 'Captain' now instead of a Commander. She will always be a 'commander' to me no matter what title she ever gets :p
Absolutely fabulous story and plot otherwise :)
Yuri-hime chapter 3 . 12/30/2013
*is just absolutely melting over this story, with the biggest damn grin on my face from chapter one onward* Is there any way for me to fave this story *twice* XD
Yuri-hime chapter 2 . 12/30/2013
That is all ;3
Yuri-hime chapter 1 . 12/30/2013
I liked all the different shifting points of view. Very interesting story so far :)
LinkedTortoise chapter 9 . 12/13/2013
The size of the Victory (825 m long, 426m wide, 243 m deep) is extremely large for a frigate class ship for canon Mass Effect. Most size estimates of the Normandy SR-2 put it at 200 to 300 m long and the canon codex states dreadnoughts are 800 - 1000m long and cannot land on planets. Have you increased the size of all ships across the entire setting or is this just an oversight?

Very enjoyable read so far.
Kasanra chapter 50 . 10/21/2013
I'm finally finished and I can't wait to get to the sequel. Epic story.
Kasanra chapter 4 . 10/18/2013
I really really like this story but sometimes you have these bracket things beside words[like this] and it really breaks the story. (hahaha you also did something like this :p)

It didn't happen in this chapter -only- but this one really drew me in and I kept stumbling over those bracket[things]. (:p)
LitNiche chapter 50 . 7/7/2013
Absolutely captivating and well done. I hope you write professionally and if you do not, that you will consider doing so.
Negrath chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
Just felt like I had to comment on the navigator being a 'diehard' terra firma man. Where would one get that idea? I do not believe he looked at those with anything but the dismissal one gives football bullies. And then there's the little pad in the wreck of sr-1...
Maybe at first, but once saren bit the dust, I'm sure he cut up and burned his membership card.
There. Good to have it out of my system. :)
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