Reviews for Fear
sapphire0427 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Ha ha! That was so much fun! I grinned like a fool through the whole hunt. :) But you also had some real emotional depth, with Jasper thinking Bella still thought of him as a monster. Very nicely balanced. Good work!
GenerallyGeorgia chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
i love this story, i hate spiders and frogs too. especially the hairy ones. gross. i loved how you made it look like she was afraid of Jasper and it turned out to be a spider. that was so funny.
Insideitall chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
OMG I laughed so hard! Well done!
SpecialAgentG chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
omg that was hilarious lol!
HisJoy chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Hi! This is a really funny and cute story! I love all of your stories! Especially considering that I have 3 brothers so I can definetly relate! I think you should definitly write another story to go with this one. One taking place after Breaking Dawn, something mabye with Renesessme in it. Mabye Jacob knows about Bella's fear because he played pranks on her when they were kids and he gets Nessie to give her a spider or a frog?
xxxafc chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
aww that was so funny, adorable!:)
kristine chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
lol i loved it!.. i thought it was cute!..
daggydarkweb.de chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
ugh spiders are ugly...

exactly this morning when i was about to step into the shower

there was huge ugly terrifying monsterspider sitting in it and glaring up at me like it was going to eat me...

maan my scream woke up the whole lot of my family and they where

so not pleased D

so enough of my random bubbling stupid stuff and

yeaah i really enjoyed that story very much,was laughing really hard all the time reading D

love it and thanks to you

dani
RaCullen chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Yep, a spider would have definitely sent me running too! Frogs - not so much. Although, my daughter chases my son around the yard with earthworms and he screams! Does that count?
atypical-swan chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
That actually makes perfect sense - of course Bella'd be terrified of a spider whilst surrounded by vampires and werewolves. This was hilarious.
murmure etoile chapter 1 . 3/6/2009
Lol! Hilarious! I'm laughing so hard right now my chest hurts...
Molly333 chapter 1 . 3/5/2009
The ending with Emmett cracks me up. I love it. Cute story, well-written.
HarryPotter4evah chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
Hello :D

haha, I loved this one-shot. I read the summary before reading the story, and I was really sceptical, because I thought she would run away because of Edward or one of the Cullens. Brilliant plot, though! Lol, she was more scared of a spider, than the vampire. You've got to love that... :P

I felt so sorry for Jasper in this story, especially when he thought she was talking about him when she said the spider was a monster.

I hate spiders too. Ugh. Their so creepy, and just like Bella pointed out in this story, you can't hear them sneak up on you, and you can't hear them move at all.

I've never really thought about being scared of frogs, but they're not exacly my favorite animal ;)

I love the way you write as well :)

HarryPotter4Evah
Lozzarah chapter 1 . 2/19/2009
LMAO! That was hilarious!

I hate worms. I'll pick 'em up on a stick but no way in hell are you ever going to see me knowingly touch one. And frogs are slimy and gross. Spiders used to terrify me, now I name them and we have agreements that if they stay in their designated area, I won't kill them. But that only goes for spiders that are tiny...and not dangerous.

Yeah...sorry...I didn't mean to type all that. I could delete it but where's the fun in that?

Sorry, amazing story. Love it.

-Lauren.
KelliNew chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
What a delightful story! I loved it. Thanks for sharing. Hope your write more Twilight stories. Kelli
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