Reviews for Fear
Cleigh chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Ha Ha that was funny! :D Usually I just read long multi-chapter fics but this one-shot is one of my favorites. When she was giving Edward a run down of all the critters that scared her I was LOL.

My favorite part -

“Your attention please, Grasshopper,” I whispered sagely to Jasper. “Observe. Though the prey appears weak, do not be fooled, young hunter. He is crouched, ready to strike. Be ever vigilant.”
Phoenix Fanatic chapter 1 . 5/9/2009
HAHA HILARIOUS! Nicely written!
thumbelina.rocks chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
You hit the nail on the head! Spiders and Frogs...*shudders* It's really bad because I like in FL so both the spiders and the frogs are rather plentiful. And somehow all of my spiders wind up being the size of small dog too. lol Great Story!
fangirl94 chapter 1 . 4/30/2009
oh, wow. this is so funny! the best by far!

ugh, i hate spiders too, but ida know frogs are kinda cool to me lol
ccssy -littlewolf chapter 1 . 4/26/2009
ahaha...this is SO funny...it's a shame i've read it just about now...i could totally relate w/ the spider idea...usually i would run as far away as possible..or maybe just hide in the nearest available room...that was great :)) though if it really was just small i would have probably killed it (not w/ my own shoes) right away
sapphire0427 chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
Ha ha! That was so much fun! I grinned like a fool through the whole hunt. :) But you also had some real emotional depth, with Jasper thinking Bella still thought of him as a monster. Very nicely balanced. Good work!
GenerallyGeorgia chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
i love this story, i hate spiders and frogs too. especially the hairy ones. gross. i loved how you made it look like she was afraid of Jasper and it turned out to be a spider. that was so funny.
Insideitall chapter 1 . 4/17/2009
OMG I laughed so hard! Well done!
SpecialAgentG chapter 1 . 4/4/2009
omg that was hilarious lol!
HisJoy chapter 1 . 3/31/2009
Hi! This is a really funny and cute story! I love all of your stories! Especially considering that I have 3 brothers so I can definetly relate! I think you should definitly write another story to go with this one. One taking place after Breaking Dawn, something mabye with Renesessme in it. Mabye Jacob knows about Bella's fear because he played pranks on her when they were kids and he gets Nessie to give her a spider or a frog?
xxxafc chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
aww that was so funny, adorable!:)
kristine chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
lol i loved it!.. i thought it was cute!..
daggydarkweb.de chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
ugh spiders are ugly...

exactly this morning when i was about to step into the shower

there was huge ugly terrifying monsterspider sitting in it and glaring up at me like it was going to eat me...

maan my scream woke up the whole lot of my family and they where

so not pleased D

so enough of my random bubbling stupid stuff and

yeaah i really enjoyed that story very much,was laughing really hard all the time reading D

love it and thanks to you

dani
RaCullen chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Yep, a spider would have definitely sent me running too! Frogs - not so much. Although, my daughter chases my son around the yard with earthworms and he screams! Does that count?
atypical-swan chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
That actually makes perfect sense - of course Bella'd be terrified of a spider whilst surrounded by vampires and werewolves. This was hilarious.
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