Reviews for Alternate Universe
Lady Barbossa329 chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Geez! Orochimaru sure is persistant, isn't he? Great story(I've only been able to read the first chapter so far)! I'll read more!
apnkhg chapter 8 . 8/17/2008
WHAET? Is it finished? :O It was great! I just love your stories! Keep them coming please!:) It has been nice reading this story:)
apnkhg chapter 7 . 8/17/2008
Another great chapter!:) Keep up the good work!:)
ChocoLover1331 chapter 6 . 8/1/2008
didnt u already post this chappie? XD
ChocoLover1331 chapter 5 . 7/19/2008
"she helped me with everything" LOL! nice! glad to have been helpful! and lol! poor jiraiya! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPPIE! :D
apnkhg chapter 5 . 7/19/2008
What? He didn't find her? O.o She hasn't gone to Orochimaru for comfort... RIGHT? If she has... ew... :P How would she want that anyways?... He's just... Himself... ehh.. Um.. Yeah...

Anyways, great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!:)
dragongoth chapter 4 . 7/17/2008
Haha that animal scene was pretty random, but funny. Another great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next
KhaleesiOfCasterlyRock chapter 4 . 7/17/2008
i loved this chapter

keep up the good work!
apnkhg chapter 4 . 7/17/2008
Aw, too bad he wasn't able to explain everything the way it was...:(

Orochimaru... I hate that guy...

Nice chapter:) Can't wait for the next one!:)
ChocoLover1331 chapter 4 . 7/16/2008
KhaleesiOfCasterlyRock chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
oh i love the way u mixed the stores with the characters and sakura and sasuke as there employees!

i love the story!
dragongoth chapter 3 . 7/12/2008
Ah sorry I haven't reviewed this yet..heh kinda kept forgeting too. I love the whole idea. This is one of my favorite that you've written keep up the good work
apnkhg chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
Oh no! Jiraya what have you done!

great story so far:) Can't wait for the next chapter:)
ChocoLover1331 chapter 3 . 7/10/2008
ChocoLover1331 chapter 2 . 6/30/2008
YAY! THT WAS FUN WRITING! LOLZ! anyays, the next chappie was SO hard to write but everything better be ok! *evil voice* HAHA! JUST KIDDING! :D
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