|Reviews for Princess of the Moon|
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/2
And here it goes off the rails. It's too bad how so many fics start out so well and then turn into complete garbage because the writer goes crazy and tries to bring in too many OC's, ridiculously overcomplicates the plot and just basically jumps the fucking shark. No point in reading this fic any further. Rest in Peace.
| Fast Frank chapter 17 . 3/25/2014
Notes for when this story is resumed: Gendo is making associations which should be logically impossible. If Ranma had kept the title, Sailor Sol, that would have fit the solar system pattern, but by standard astronomical terminology, The Inner Solar System ends at the asteriod belt. Therefore, Gendo should expect Venus, but not Jupiter. (Grouping Jupiter with the Inner Planets is an invention of SM's author.) However "Starfire" breaks the pattern, therefore, Gendo should have more questions in his mind, possibly leading to red herrings. Since Jupiter and Saturn are planets of classical astrology, so he might consider a possible Sailor Saturn, as well.
"Manna" passes the spell checker since the reference is Biblical, but is not the magical "mana".
| Fast Frank chapter 11 . 3/24/2014
When you use 'real life' terms you really need to know what you are talking about. A wet suit is worn essentially without clothes, the thin layer of water underneath providing an insulating effect, while allowing free motion for swimming. The sewage worker is wearing a dry suit over his work clothes.
"route" "doofus" "slammed her food down"? Was she eating during the battle, and I didn't notice, or did you mean "foot"? "pistol"
| Fast Frank chapter 10 . 3/24/2014
"elegance and poise of professionals"? So Nadoka didn't actually see Sailor Moon in that fight?
Again "peaked" misused, usually I see it for "piqued", but this time for "peeked". Anyway, "poked her head..." would have been more correct.
"as only two completely inept female sword fighter could." - LOL
| Fast Frank chapter 7 . 3/24/2014
I found it distracting that you felt the need to defend Rei's academic prowess by giving awkwardly worded excuse for her missing an "ace breaker" question.
| SailorNova007 chapter 17 . 3/8/2014
hope you update soon
| Incognito chapter 17 . 12/25/2013
I've really liked your story, it's such a shame that it hasn't been updated in quite a while. I hope one day you'ill pick up right where you left off. Cheers.
| Fenarinarsas chapter 17 . 3/27/2013
Such a delightful and entertaining crossover that explores some very interesting ideas.
Even if the story seems to have died, what has been written is worth the time to read. This is one story I will be happy to read again some time in the future.
Thank you so much for the time and effort you have dedicated into the creation of this amusing tale.
| Grizzmon chapter 17 . 3/25/2013
i don't want Jade to die...
| Grizzmon chapter 16 . 3/25/2013
| Grizzmon chapter 15 . 3/25/2013
Gendo sure is a bastard...
| Grizzmon chapter 14 . 3/25/2013
Yeah, being a magical girl is bad enough...
| Grizzmon chapter 13 . 3/25/2013
Usagi and the Matrix, funny...
| Grizzmon chapter 12 . 3/25/2013
I am liking this version of Happosai ...
| Grizzmon chapter 10 . 3/25/2013
So, Ranma-chan will live in place with sacred tree?