Reviews for Harry Potter and the Golden Needle |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sad, another goes into the dust pile of a dead muse. |
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![]() ![]() Apostrophes are not for making plurals. Dursleys. OWLs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you get bored writing this and that's why you haven't updated in over 10 years? Having read it I feel that the pace of the story is too slow, and while quite a bit has happed I also don't feel like much has changed since the first chapter to move the story along. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The way you wrote this makes me feel like there is a narrator voiceover. And I absolutely love it. |
![]() ![]() Great story. Thanks. I’d love to see them finally transfigured gold. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so ive read this story and Ive decided...I dont like vector now it was an okay story and I could see where you were going with it but the issue I have with the premise is this: what does harry get out of doing the experiments with vector? yeah maybe hell eventually turn something into gold and be recognized as the person who did it and, as an unexpected if pleasant side effect, gain greater control over his magic. but vector doesn't even bother to attempt to teach harry the basics of arithmancy, just brushes it off as 'you dont need to cover it for our research'. that's a direct quote. it bothers me because it isn't a reciprocityits vector using harry for her own purpose with no technical benefit for him whatsoever and he just along with it. no payment, no gifting of knowledge (as would be seen in and internship or apprenticeship), nothing harry can actually use in the future that isn't a side benefit that he discovered himself. it's annoying, especially as she is literally in a position of authority as a teacher. basically, vector is just not a very nice character when it comes down to it, not as a person nor as a tearcher. her practices are unethical and unprofessional when it comes to Harry. was not what I was expecting from the story summary. well written with some interesting ideas maybe but still... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cool story. :) Was hoping for more chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() If the identity of Harry's GodMother can be fidelised, what else can be? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Voldemort succeeded...he broke Harry's will. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry should turn in the Ministry mouth-piece for being an illegal animagus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have enjoyed reading this story again. Thank you for writing this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I figured out the code by myself. I was thinking that Harry was working with gold and elements. So I thought the numbers might be atomic numbers. P he o ni xe s Ba la n ce Ru s Phoenixes Balance I Win |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have this odd feeling that Amelia Bones is his godmother. |