Reviews for OffBalance
Guest chapter 62 . 1/30/2016
Normally, I don't like Kyo to be the seme, but this is really, really good. You probably have a ton of other things to do, but please consider finishing this story! It's almost been six years, so I'm not really optimistic, but still. Anyway, your style of writing is really different, and you didn't show blatant favoritism towards any character (from what I could tell)! Thank you for this amazing fanfic.
Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2015
wow! 62 whole chapters. great story. i'll read on.
MeltedMoonStone chapter 23 . 7/7/2014
HAHAHAHAHA! I laughed so hard at the end of this!
Guest chapter 62 . 8/17/2013
Even though its HIATUS etc.
Please try and update!
kitkatkati chapter 62 . 5/17/2013
Dude... U never finished the story, how could u do that!:'(it was soooooo good. Ahhh whatever I forgive u, cause u stopped writing on an okay chapter to stop writing. Wonderful story, perfect, my fav so far, I've read every single chapter:D
SweetLiars chapter 44 . 5/16/2013
Haven't reviewed in a while... I skipped quite a few chapters too... all well! Kyo, admit your LOVE and be a MAN! Get your man back into your room!
AmyGoHope chapter 62 . 4/23/2013
Honestly speaking, Yuki turned into someone I didn't want Kyo to end up with. The last five or so chapters Kyo was in nothing but pain 'cause of him. He didn't feel guilty or anything. Then all of a sudden he is all kisses and shit, and Kyo goes along with it. It felt like Kyo was abandoned and that Yuki was okay moving on for a while. He never had any realization as to how he was acting or apologized to Kyo who was open with him, until Yuki started shoving him away. Yuki in the beginning was all I don't care what anyone thinks, then he changed his mind from one visit to Akito, then after putting Kyo through issues he is again all Fuck Them, Just Me & You. It's unsettling, and I feel that Yuki would have to realize what he was doing for them to move on and proceed in their relationship. It feels very incomplete for them to resolve and unite feelings again like this. I really suck at explaining how I feel about things, so I'm sorry if this makes no sense what-so-ever.
I really like how you wrote it, I do. It's just, I feel too much pain for Kyo with how he opened to Yuki like that, then it felt like he was being abandoned and led on for a while by Yuki.
I can't wait to read what happens next!
ThisxIsxMyxOTP chapter 53 . 3/28/2013
lol "You're kinda like smoke or fog or sumthin.." I love his description of yuki, he sounds so high XD
ThisxIsxMyxOTP chapter 29 . 3/22/2013
ceciliablue14 chapter 3 . 3/20/2013
SweetLiars chapter 18 . 1/26/2013
Ooh, yea! Can't wait to read the next one!
SweetLiars chapter 16 . 1/26/2013
Wow, I think I read this chapter before, but I'm not sure... Hmmm...
SweetLiars chapter 9 . 1/22/2013
Oh snap!
SweetLiars chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
Ha, rereading this story finally. Loving it, thou I don't think I even read all the chapters yet...
Yoruhime-san chapter 62 . 11/12/2012
This chapter was spo VSFIDV AMAZING! I was scared for a sec, thinking they were going to break up. Please take this off hiatus. Please please please. I want to keep reading MORE
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